Stranded at the Drive-in 2/3 Completed

[merepersiflage]

Title: Stranded at the Drive-in
Author: merepersiflage
Pairings: Sam/Dean, Dean/others-but you know I’m all about the OTP, right?
Rating: 18+
Category: slash
Word Count: 23,000
Spoilers:Through “Bugs” though the note below spoils “Salvation” a bit
Summary: Couples disappear from an X-rated drive-in.
Warnings: Incest, graphic m/m sex, language,

Comments

[jakesdream]

OMG possesive/jealous Sam? Love it too death. Seems like we can add incredible hulk Sam as well ;) OMG can't wait for chapter 3, here I go :) Excellent so far btw :) JD

[merepersiflage]

Yeah the crazy jealous Sam? all la_folle_allure's idea. But I'm so glad you like him too. He was fun to write like that. I hope you enjoy the end. Thanks so much for commenting as you read.

[mf_luder_xf]

Hee!!! Protective brother mixed with possessive lover is just...GUH. So wrong, and so funny, so hott.

Oh, the fucker just did not pass out on him.

Seriously, couldn't breathe for like 5 minutes after reading that.

[merepersiflage]

Thank you so much for commenting as you read it. I'm really glad you got the way Sam was feeling so mixed up. And that whole confession while Dean was drunk was la_folle_allure's idea. I'm glad you liked the execution of it.

[deirdre_c]

Oh Sammy, Sammy! *cuddles him*

You've done such a nice job of making me HATE James. With the fire of etc. etc.

The woman had really kept her curves. He was gonna start taking an interest in older women. He’d heard they were-
Ah, Dean. Anything on two legs. (But *ahem* Dean! Older woman here! *raises hand*)

“You really think he looked like me?”“Cocky? Bad hair? Short? Yeah, a lot like you.”
V. funny. *g* But Sammy doesn't have much room to talk on the hair issue, yeah?

“Uh. . .” Dean played a lot of AC/DC in the car, “. . .AC/DC." Both Dean and James laughed as if Sam were the funniest thing on the planet.
See I started out just disliking James (and the way he makes Dean act) in the diner, but you are racheting up the hate-o-meter quite nicely as we go along.

“God, Dean, I tried.” .... “I tried, but I couldn’t stop wanting this. Never stopped. Even when . . . ” He thought the words would choke him but he had to get them out. “Even when I kissed her, I could still feel you, taste you.”
*wibble* Ow, dammit, that hurt!

“What the

[merepersiflage]

But *ahem* Dean! Older woman here! *raises hand*) From one older woman to another then, you know what the rest of Dean's thought was, right?:D As older women, we could totally wear that boy out!

But Sam really thinks his hair is better than his brothers. Oh Sammy!

James. You know, la_folle_allure just loved James. She was trying to get me past my OTP obsession and the handjob was my one concession to how much she helped me with this fic. I was thinking James was just trying to be everything Dean would find attractive and went with the male persona because Dean had been at the drive in that night. While I was in Sammy's pov, I totally wanted to strangle James, but I hope he was at least marginally attractive to Dean. I couldn't go to Dean's pov without ruining the whole jealousy of Sam. I didn't want Dean to be clueless because I really think he's too smart for that.

Again, I can't express enough how much these kind of detailed comments (Dean paraphrase0"blow wind up my skirt." Thanks again.

[live_life_36]

OMG!!!! Sammy, jealous! How cute! I love this. It gets better and better. I can't wait to see how it all ends. Love it!!!!

[merepersiflage]

Sammy is cute when he's jealous, and I can see him getting that way. Of course, as I've said before jealousSam was all la_folle_allure's idea. Thanks so much for commenting as you read. I really appreciate hearing about all the parts.

[saturnsdaughter]

-cackles- Poor jealous Sammy, he's really driving himself crazy over this one >D
Even I'll admit that this James guy has gotten too close for comfort though, no matter how hot he is.

“You were first,” James said, an acknowledgement of something else hanging in the air. “I can wait.”
Obviously not talking syrup, the sneaky bastard.

[merepersiflage]

Yeah, jealous Sam was fun to write. I mean who wouldn't be sick over losing Dean to some sneaky bastard. I'm so glad you liked James's line over the syrup. It made me want to smack James at the same time as cackle with him. I'm glad you thought James was hot. I wanted him to be.