Secret Santa Gift (The Fic)

Dec 25, 2008 00:10

This is the second part of my secret santa gift for thanatopsis76, as part of the gift exchange at dvlwears_prada. Hope you enjoy!

Title: Elevator Confessions
Author: Mercury

Fandom: The Devil Wears Prada
Pairing: Miranda/Andy
Rating: PG-13

Summary: Allowing Andrea to ride in the elevator with her on Christmas Eve turned into more than Miranda had bargained for.

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dwp, secret santa, fiction

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tanama30 December 25 2008, 06:02:56 UTC
nice story i loved every minute of it. especially when andy kissed her palm that was a touching gesture

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mercurychkita December 25 2008, 20:23:36 UTC
Aw, thanks. That scene was actually the first one that I wrote, so I'm glad you liked it!

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jesi76082 December 25 2008, 06:20:46 UTC
Aw....
So far THE BEST elevator fic I've read (and I've read them ALL because I LOVE ELEVATOR FICS!!!)

This is made of win!

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mercurychkita December 25 2008, 20:24:31 UTC
That's sweet of you. I had a minor panic attack of my own when I saw that other story posted only a few days ago, so I'm glad this one was able to stand out for you.

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Loved it! hawkbehere December 25 2008, 06:33:32 UTC
Of course I did. Entirely charming and exceedingly well written. Very, very Miranda. And very Andy. I'm as delighted as I thought I'd be. I may have made a few undignified squee! sounds but you'll never know.

Thank you for quelling the impulse to end where I know you wanted to. For the record, it didn't even ping on my schmaltz meter.

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Re: Loved it! mercurychkita December 25 2008, 20:31:35 UTC
Undignified squee sounds? You? I can't imagine... *grin*

And yeah, I bow to Susan when she demands that I make changes, and I'll admit that it was the right move here. I kept telling her that I couldn't imagine this version of Miranda giving in to the temptation, as it were, so we managed to work around it.

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jenc81 December 25 2008, 06:36:13 UTC
That was a really sweet Christmas story. I loved the ending.

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mercurychkita December 25 2008, 20:31:56 UTC
Thank you! Glad you liked it.

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inlove_n_inhate December 25 2008, 07:00:04 UTC
If they requested baked cookies and milk for Santa, she would do her duty and eat a few bites. To maintain the illusion the next morning, of course. Perhaps they’d insist that Santa deserved those delectable double chocolate chunk cookies, she pondered. Now that was great. I mean…making it a duty to eat the cookies and the double chocolate chunks…mmmm. (smile) I really liked those lines.

Slowly, Miranda opened her eyes and fixed her gaze on Andrea, who was bracing herself against the wall, clutching at her chest, and seemed to be trying to suck the entire oxygen supply from the small enclosure into her struggling lungs. Well…that was hilarious. Just the thought and image I got and the way that sentence would have sounded coming from Miranda. (smile)

Their discussions throughout were interesting. I loved how Miranda got pissy with Andy’s passioned rant only to miss the amicable conversation when she had only just crushed it seconds before. (smile) Their conversations about Stephen and the turkey and the twins was great as well.

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mercurychkita December 25 2008, 20:34:05 UTC
Ah, you always leave such detailed feedback - it makes my little writer's heart flutter. I'm glad you didn't choke too badly (you would have needed Miranda around to calm you down again...)

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