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memorfix

Creaky Stairs 1

May 20, 2007 00:46

Creaky Stairs

to come: humor, horror, angst. NC-17. Many pairings.

Most of the guys in the first team come over to spend the weekend at Wayne’s in the countryside. “I swear this place is haunted”, Carrick breathed, his face as white as a clean sheet.

A/N This fic is time-lined after the Europe XI-game in March, 13th of March to be exact. The ( Read more... )

ryan giggs/gary neville, john o'shea, gabriel heinze, cristiano ronaldo/wayne rooney, rio ferdinand, team: manchester united, michael carrick, darren fletcher/john o'shea, gary neville, cristiano ronaldo/rio ferdinand, wes brown, wayne rooney, rating: nc-17, gary neville/david beckham, football slash, nemanja vidic, cristiano ronaldo, alan smith/darren fletcher, alan smith, cristiano ronaldo/gabriel heinze, darren fletcher, fic, ryan giggs, angst, david beckham, title: creaky stairs

Comments 27

junalele May 19 2007, 22:15:48 UTC

Gah! GAH!!!

Oh God, I so love this. Rio and Vida and Cristiano - I smell a threesome! Rio did ask for both of them! He did! And jealous!Wayne? Soooo much love! As are Giggsy and Gaz. I don't even really see them as possible pairing normally but Gaz and Becks and *melts* Did I mention how much I love the Cristyne on the horizon? And Gaby? So awesome! And-

*TWIRLS*

memorfix May 24 2007, 16:29:41 UTC

Hehee [yeah, so I'm four days late; bite my head off. ^^], am terribly happy you liked this! ^^ And hmmm... Rio/Vida/Cris... that's an idea... *ponders* Jealous!Wayne is an annoying, cutie-pie!Waynie. lol

The next part is acting out, though. :/ It'll take a while to build up, bohoo.. :(

junalele May 24 2007, 20:22:01 UTC

*bites head off, only to hand in back sheepishly* Hey, you asked for it. ROFL.

Rio/Vida/Cris... that's an idea... *ponders*
You think so? OH YES!!! You need to write that then. Oh please! Just imagine... Gah!

*glares at next part* Maybe you could try your own cookie idea?

tusenfryd May 19 2007, 22:51:59 UTC

Eep! They are all there!!!
So many players, so many possibilities!

I love all those implications interactions between them. So great!
Oh, and all the little hints at a more or less shared past!
I can't wait for the next part :)

Thank you so much for writing this and making the day a bit happier!

memorfix May 20 2007, 15:50:20 UTC

And still not everybody! XD I feel like I will have to have some of the other guys stop by too for some random lovefun. lol

Thank you for the lovely comment! :) Glad you liked the fic and it made you feel better! ^^

tusenfryd May 20 2007, 20:42:25 UTC

Isn't there some saying that goes 'The more the merrier'?
That's especially true for random fun, I think ;P

Oh, and as I'm sometimes a bit blind, I only noticed the 'horror' and the little part of the Carrick-scene on top of the page.
Gah! I can't wait to read that!

alejaboo May 19 2007, 23:34:14 UTC

that was..gah
but, but alan and fletch and wes were my fave and pink towels and sitting on the balcony watching pouring rain *sigh*
more.i want more

memorfix May 20 2007, 12:21:15 UTC

Glad you liked! More to come, yepyep. ^^

kobean May 19 2007, 23:42:38 UTC

Holy.

I don't... where to begin?

I f'love this idea - absolutely brilliant. You got them all in there, with perfect dialogue for everyone. Eeep. ♥ The Ryan/Gary bit made me so sad. AEKAEKNLEAT. Omg. I was sitting here, HOPING PRAYING that Gaz would run after him or something. IS DEAD. I can't wait for the next part, I really can't.

And then Rio/Cris = HAWT.

Jealous/Angry!Wayne = ADORABLE.

Wayne/Cris (or implying of the two) = OMG CAN'T FREAKIN WAIT.

And then Wes, Darren, Alan, and O'Shea in the bathroom. ROTFL. Omg. So precious. I can just see it all happening. And then Vida, being so excited/waiting for Rio. EEP. LOVE. And Gaby.... is so adorable. Like really. Sigh. And Mikey - just eating his breadstick. LOL.

I really can't wait for the next part. I"M HOOKED. (MORE THAN HOOKED) Maybe a tad bit obsessed. I was doing some chores downstairs just smiling at the thought of this. Look what you did. :P Thank you, for this. It really made my day. Sigh. ♥

Wonderful start. :D :D

kobean May 20 2007, 00:02:12 UTC

Plus: Could we maybe possible start tagging fics by character and rating, too? It would be really helpful for browsers.

Oh, of course! :D

aeroporto May 20 2007, 01:08:58 UTC

I was gonna suggest that after I saw the list of pairings. lol. Anyways, ifsudfsudfihsf at the fick. Great start. And I expect more!!

memororis May 21 2007, 13:47:28 UTC

EEEEP! Your comment rocks my world. ^^ THANK YOU!

Maybe a tad bit obsessed. I was doing some chores downstairs just smiling at the thought of this.
lol. The mere thought of that makes me jätte (=very in Swedish, I don't know what's wrong with me) amused. Awww. :)

I hope I can post the next part soon! [Probably won't though 'cos I'm mentally dead from starting my syper boring summer job. Fuck no. lol]

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memorfix May 20 2007, 13:25:57 UTC

Hee, thank you! Will write more to this! ^^ And post as soon as possible. ^^