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devikun in mcsheplets

[fic] Pour a Torrent of Light into our Dark World

Apr 18, 2008 07:54

Title: Pour a Torrent of Light into our Dark World
Author: Devera
Rating: R
Word Count: ~ 420
Notes: Slightly (very?) obscure take on challenge number 17: We're Not Dead Yet!

( Sweating, shaking. Breath thin in his lungs, head reeling. )

genre: established relationship, author: devikun, pairing: john/rodney, rating: r, challenge: 17 - we're not dead!

Comments 24

equusentric April 17 2008, 22:37:12 UTC

GUH HOT!! *flails and melts*

devikun April 18 2008, 14:35:14 UTC

WAH YAY! Thanks! ^__^

Also, that is a very pretty icon you have there... ehem.

tarlanx April 17 2008, 23:53:43 UTC

Phew! Is it hot in here :-)
Love that last line!

devikun April 18 2008, 14:33:38 UTC

hahahaha Is it hot? I hope so! ;) Glad you liked it!

jessebee April 18 2008, 00:02:38 UTC

Oh. Oh, WOW. I'll just be, uhm...(points to bunk)

devikun April 18 2008, 14:25:14 UTC

lol! Glad you enjoyed it!

lerah99 April 18 2008, 00:03:18 UTC

Dear LORD this is hot! How did you cram so much Heat and Porn into 420 words? Wow! Thank you so much for posting this! It is yummy!

devikun April 18 2008, 14:24:24 UTC

Thanks! I'm really glad you liked it!

ozsaur April 18 2008, 01:50:59 UTC

:::fans self::: That was really, really HOT!

devikun April 18 2008, 14:22:39 UTC

Thanks! Glad it turned up your temperature! ;)