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TEAM SHEPPARD: abandon ship, "Unsinkable"

Aug 21, 2011 19:19

Title: Unsinkable
Author: skitz_phenom
Team: Sheppard
Prompt: abandon ship
Pairing(s): McKay/Sheppard
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: None
Summary: When Rodney talks John into taking a little ride on an Ancient monorail, he ends up somewhere unexpected.
Notes: I want to give special thanks to my wing-sis, bardicsidhe, for always being my rock and sounding board, even when ( Read more... )

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pir8fancier August 23 2011, 03:15:08 UTC

Such nice world-building!

fanficfan123 August 23 2011, 03:32:51 UTC

Appreciated the play with Titanic and Jennifer's being from Chippewa Fallss-of course, the Titanic was supposed to be the unsinkable ship. But, like Rodney and Jennifer, it carried its burdens in all the wrong areas . . . as opposed to Rodney's deliberately sinking the rowboat in response to John's fears and wishes.

popkin16 August 23 2011, 06:47:27 UTC

I love this so, so much. The adventure! Pining!John and not-so-oblivious!Rodney XD Keller and Rodney's believable break up, Titanic, the ending. It made me grin like an idiot. Amazing job, I enjoyed this fic a great deal!

antares04a August 23 2011, 15:37:14 UTC

A great adventure! And I can totally see John's and also Rodney's fascination with this old monorail and the possibility to bring them to a ZPM. Nice team moments and lovely dialogues between John and Rodney.

omg_wtf_yeah August 23 2011, 19:33:12 UTC

That was wonderful. It'll sound weird but it kind of reminded me of Stand By Me, in that the journey facilitated a greater understanding between the guys involved. I really enjoyed its pace and how the guys worked it out between crises. My favorite part was definitely the lake scene. I love that John locked up (everyone has weak points) and Rodney stepped up for him. And cute scene with Keller at the end - it was too funny how they were exploiting the Titanic thing. ;)