Broken Tears Part 1

[matthewsbabacy]

Hey everyone, so this is another new story that my friend Rachel came up with, and I helped featuring our very own Ryder Matthews :D Let us know what you think!

Comments

[rachemma]

'I detect no bodily harm, so why are you so distraught?' Oh I laughed so hard even though I came up with it :') I love her :D
It looks much better too now that it's on here :D
Rach xxx

(RalphFiennes)

[constannlegacy]

Seams interesting..I like it! =D

Re: (RalphFiennes)

[rachemma]

Thanks :D

[mirandacourt347]

:D
Wow, my favourites sure do have themselves awesome stories, huh?
How about some writing before the vampire diaries? ;)

[matthewsbabacy]

:D

Does that answwer your question :P

[rachemma]

Thanks :D

AHHHHHHHHHHHHH

[thejarretlegacy]

OMG SERIOUSLY? THAT WAS AMAZING!!!! I was on the edge if my seat the whole time. It sucks that Ryder is in so much pain. :(
But it was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo flippin amazing. GREAT JOB RACHELS. LOL Can't wait to read more

Re: AHHHHHHHHHHHHH

[rachemma]

Thank you ;) We'll be writing the next chapter around about now (if Rach is on fb or msn) so you actually find out her name xD

[chipchipo]

I thought Ryder was only half vamp.. why is he having the same side affects as a whole vamp? :( Sorry, but I just feel bad for him :P It seems like an.. interesting.. story I guess. Kind of confusing though :S :p

[rachemma]

It is, we hope to kind of de-confuse you in Chapter 2, at least I want too xD