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mase992

Poland - "Endlessly" (Part I)

Mar 21, 2010 22:07

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The silence that suddenly filled the room was just as deadly as the motion of Lithuania voluntarily strangling himself with the Christmas lights. It hanged like a cloud of mustard gas, uncharacteristically grey as it distilled answers from questions best left unmade. Just as the one he had just given voice to.

Across the room Poland’s ( Read more... )

character : poland, secret santa, character : lithuania, axis powers hetalia

Comments 6

claritins March 22 2010, 11:04:36 UTC

Completely stunning! I really love Poland and this first part is amazing *v*
If you need to put it under a cut, try this :

Story here

You have to put it in the HTML form though. I can't wait to read the next few parts.

I send thee love! ^3^ mase992 March 23 2010, 06:07:10 UTC

Thank you! Poland is my favourite character, and aside from his Hetalia character the country is extremely interesting and its history so full of heroism and sacrifice it fascinates me.

But the language, damn it! The language! It's a killer x_X.

Thank you for the heads up and I'll edit it under a cut soon. :D

The rest of the parts are up already here in my journal. I hope you enjoy them when you read them ^_^!

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mase992 March 23 2010, 06:08:18 UTC

No no no, you're not rude. I understand but I had been having trouble putting it under an lj cut >_<. I'll edit it when I manage to.

I'm sorry....

tamerlorika March 23 2010, 04:29:49 UTC

This is beautiful... I mean... I don't know how else to put it. I appreciate all of the attention and research you must have put in and I'm so glad I found this.

mase992 March 23 2010, 06:10:37 UTC

Oh, thank you for your kind comment :'D. Poland is such a fascinating country and there is so much you can add to develop his character and define him with such a diverse and troubling past. I'm glad you recognize my research and hope you continue enjoying this story.

Believe me, I'm glad you found it as well. Comments feed the starved writing!muse <3.

:D

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mase992 April 5 2010, 10:18:05 UTC

I know... despite his base personality in canon, his more "feminine" side is exploited too much in the fandom and it detracts from certain aspects of his personality and everybody sometimes seem to forget that depsite all this he is still a Nation, and damn proud one at that.

Oh Jadwiga... ♥ I did want to show at least a certain reluctance and that's why she keeps telling Pol about her new husband's more tiresome traits ;). I remember seeing a drawing somewhere where she told Poland that Jagiello looked like a bear and both were extremely confused and nervous that she would have to marry a bear.

Thank you for reading this ^0^.