Sam fic: "Bad Step" Part 24, rated PG

Nov 21, 2007 09:56

And the night crawls on...

Bad Step, Part 24 )

sam fic, lotr fic - gen, frodo fic

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shirebound November 21 2007, 17:35:26 UTC
"The heart of a Gamgee is the best part of you. In all my ramblings, I have never met with any hobbits who are truer in heart than you."

"Begging your pardon, Master, but I might say the same of you."

Awww, what a wonderful conversation. I hope everyone can get some peaceful sleep now.

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mariole November 21 2007, 18:30:42 UTC
Yes, a nice restful sleep. They earned it!

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belleferret November 21 2007, 18:31:25 UTC
'Don't use your head; it's not the best part of you.'
Oh Mariole, this is perfect. Sam says the same to himself when he thinks Frodo dead.

Poor Frodo and Marigold, both blaming themselves.

*sniffles*

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mariole November 21 2007, 18:44:53 UTC
I couldn't resist slipping in that quote of Tolkien's. :) I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

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mariole November 21 2007, 18:45:33 UTC
Thanks, Mews. I just love those two together. Thanks for all your wonderful feedback. :)

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addie71 November 21 2007, 18:51:44 UTC
I really enjoyed Frodo and Marigold's time together. I think it was good that they had each other to confess to.

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mariole November 21 2007, 23:01:31 UTC
Thanks, Addie. I'd been wanting to write this scene for some time. :)

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aprilkat November 21 2007, 20:53:42 UTC
I love the way you show Frodo and Marigold becoming closer and providing each other with the support they need to release their guilt and move on.

The part about using one's heart instead of the head was very moving - and very Gamgee.

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mariole November 21 2007, 23:00:59 UTC
I like putting the different characters together to see how they'll react. They're all carrying a heavy burden at the moment...

Thanks again for dropping in.

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