Laws of Attraction - Chapter Forty: Under Arrest

[major_roon]

Title: Laws of Attraction
Author: Major Roon
Fandom: The Closer
Pairing: Brenda/Sharon
Rating: NC-17/M

Comments

[sitcomgirl90]

And my brain has exploded. Damn. That last cliff hanger was waaay worth it! I need moar! *G*

[alexis_davis02]

I have LOVED catching up and re-reading chapters over the last few weeks. I squeed when I saw this update and it did not disappoint. It's a shame that I;ve never left a comment before, but I wanted to say that this has to be the BEST Sharon/Brenda piece out there.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

[a_proposito]

well.. errr.. WOW! that was mind-blowing! just WOW! i think i need a cold shower now, thank you very much

i keep being constantly amazed by how brilliantly you write Brenda's thinking process and, i said this before, by how amusing her constant self-deception tendencies are. and i simply adore how seemingly in control but so very vulnerable at the time Sharon is with her. and how less every time they seem to be able to stay away from each other, how driven towards each other they are. and i'm so glad you stay away from it becoming too romantic in favour of keeping them in character. perfect balance. love it.

excellent chapter! keep it up an, please, update soon!

[tayryn]

OH FUCK ME!!

*fans self*

Oh, I most definitely deserved this reward after tonight's successful weigh in.

Darlin... once, again, I love you!! *G*

And once again, Sharon can do this to me. All of it. Anytime she wants.

Okay, I can't even pick out a favourite part because the whole bloody chapter is FABULOUS! Though, if I had to pick... their admussion to each other about never wanting to fuck anyone before... that was not only incredibly hot, it was a moment they needed to share that is another one to draw them closer.

Brava on yet another incredible chapter!!

[sisterbiscuit]

WOW - the hotness!

A new LOA chapter on a Closer Monday, I think the stars have aligned!

This was wonderful. I adore this story and am always excited to see what will happen next....AND all the hot sex doesn't hurt, either. ;)