A Failure of Propriety

Oct 04, 2009 20:28

Title: A Failure of Propriety ( Read more... )

fic, series 2, merlin

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glass_icarus October 4 2009, 21:14:07 UTC
oh my god, OW. D: (and &hearts &hearts &hearts, of course. squinting hopefully at OT4-ness it is!)

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srin October 4 2009, 21:39:08 UTC
I think this is possibly the least happy ending I've ever written! I don't know where that came from, seriously. But there's a good chance that Arthur's just being dumb and everyone would be happy to have an orgy with him if he would only say something. ;) Thank you!

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srin October 4 2009, 22:32:56 UTC
You try, but you suck. Yeah, that's pretty much it. :D

It's weird, because while I certainly have no problem with the idea of Merlin and Morgana actually having sexy times, I have this bizarre overpowering love for the idea of Arthur fantasizing about them together. That was kind of where this started, and I wasn't going to bother writing it, but then it morphed into this whole thing about how Arthur can't act constructively on any of his feelings and instead has to sit alone and be sad. And write angsty poetry on his lj. (...I'm not sure why I thought that was more worthy of being written than the porn, actually. Um.)

I can't quite decide whether I see this ending in OT4 happiness, or in general angst because Arthur will eventually someday get to be with Gwen on some level, but he'll never actually get over the issues that are keeping him from acting here, and meanwhile the other three aren't as happy fluffy as he imagines, for a variety of reasons, so really everyone's pretty much miserable and alone and stuck in this sucky place ( ... )

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heather October 4 2009, 23:14:54 UTC
Damn. Oh, ARTHUR. :( This is just so ouchy and perfect and just why I feel for him so much, because he doesn't even KNOW how out of the loop he REALLY is, and gah. I love him and I love you for writing this. ♥

(And yeah, everything you were hoping we'd see? I'M SEEING IT. *___*)

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srin October 5 2009, 16:49:00 UTC
He really DOESN'T, and I'm so glad that came through. (It's tricky bringing up the cluelessness of someone when said someone is your POV character! Whoops.)

&hearts, thank you!

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sophinisba October 5 2009, 01:15:53 UTC
This is so awesome. I'm so impressed with how well you balance the humor and the sad (*gives Arthur lots of hugs*) and the omg so sexy. I love it.

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srin October 5 2009, 16:50:16 UTC
\o/ Thank you! :D

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woldy October 5 2009, 02:50:35 UTC
Oh god, the latent OT4ness had broken my brain. So hot. So hot! I know Arthur's being all sadface, but the way you've written it I feel as though happy OT4 smut is totally in the offing. Or maybe OT5, once Lancelot shows his face next week...

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srin October 5 2009, 16:51:19 UTC
He needs to pull his head out of his arse and SAY something constructive, and then it will be all happy orgies. :D Thank you!

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