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macca44552

Orange Collision; ch 33

Oct 26, 2011 18:28

Title: Orange Collision
Pairings: John/Paul, George/Ringo Equal time for both pairings
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: sexual situations, drug and alcohol use, language, distressing situations
Summary: En route to Los Angeles, a storm diverts the Beatles to an uncharted island in the middle of the Pacific. Finding themselves among the few survivors, romantic ( Read more... )

the beatles, john/paul, fic: orange collision, george/ringo

Comments 32

sillygirlmartha October 27 2011, 03:17:01 UTC

Eeeeep!!! An update!! You have NO IDEA how much I love this story (: haha my favourite part was John licking Geo... Do I smell some J/G coming on? :3
--Blakely

macca44552 October 28 2011, 02:11:18 UTC

Haha, yeah. It's been awhile. XD

THIS FIC SEEMS TO HAVE ALL THE PAIRINGS.

sillygirlmartha October 28 2011, 03:30:35 UTC

omg i just realized COMMENT VIRGINITY MUAHHHH

banterknave October 27 2011, 03:22:36 UTC

WHAT. WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN. UGH.

Okay, reading..

macca44552 October 28 2011, 02:12:39 UTC

ON HIATUS. I needed to take a break from this fic because I was uninspired and it was stressing me out really badly, haha.

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quazonic October 27 2011, 03:27:14 UTC

OH MY GOD AN UPDATE. WHY DID I NOT CHECK MY FUCKING F-LIST EARLIER??? INSTEAD I WENT TO EAT BRUNCH. ALSKDJFNALKJGNAKJDFGNAKDJFGNADKFGADJFGNAKLJDFGNKAGKJ;DFGNKJADFGK;JFGNKADJFGNADKFJGNADFKJNADFGNKADFJNGAKDFGNKJDFNGKAJFHNKAFDJGN I AM STUPID

quazonic October 27 2011, 03:45:19 UTC

I STILL CAN'T BELIEVE I MISSED VIRGINITY ON THIS CHAPTER.

THE WHOLE SECTION WITH JOHN AND PAUL TEASING GEORGE--FUCKING HILARIOUS AND TOO LONG TO QUOTE HERE, DAMMIT.

Oh God, Paul was getting in on this, sitting down on the other side of George and putting an arm around him as well

LOL HOW GAY.

It was too late. John leaned forward and started licking the side of his face with his disgusting, prickly tongue, and Paul, John’s corrupted creation, was humming “Love Me Do” while hugging him tightly. If he hadn’t known any better, he’d have thought that they were either high or had just had sex, but both were impossible.

HAHAHAHAHAA POOR GEORGE.

George looked over at Ringo-he was about to make a joke about how, for once, Ringo wasn’t the one who needed all the medical attention, but froze when he saw a series of intense looks pass between him and Paul.

PAUL/RINGO CROSSED MY MIND.

Mal and Brian in their own somewhat intense bubble.

+ THE REST OF THAT PARAGRAPH; BRIAN/MAL BRIAN/MAL BRIAN/MAL! THIS STORY IS AWASH WITH PAIRINGS.

As ( ... )

macca44552 October 28 2011, 02:20:33 UTC

YOU'LL GET IT NEXT TIME, MY LOVE. *STROKES*

PAUL IS THE EPITOME OF GAY.

IT CROSSED MY MIND TOO. I'M THINKING OF JUST HAVING ALL THE CHARACTERS SAY 'FUCK IT' AND ENGAGE IN A GIANT ORGY. WHO NEEDS MODESTY ON AN UNCHARTED ISLAND?

LOOOOOOOL YES. THE PAIRINGS POP UP OUT OF NOWHERE AND I CANNOT CONTROL THEM.

They only had alcohol for the first few chapters, then Jessica took it all away so she could use it for medical purposes. But Mal's return was quite a special occasion, you see.

YES, THEY DO COME IN ALL COLORS OF THE RAINBOW. LIKE SKITTLES.

NEXT CHAPTER IS PAUL'S POV, BUT I HAVE NO IDEA WHEN I'LL BE ABLE TO WRITE/POST IT. SCHOOL, FARRAH. IT KILLS ME.

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quazonic October 29 2011, 04:39:09 UTC

AKJSDNGJKGNFKJNFDG NEXT TIME, TELL ME WHEN YOU'RE POSTING. PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE WITH PAUL'S APPLE BUM ON THE TOP?

HE IS SO GAY HE MAKES ME CRY WITH JOY.

I SUPPORT THIS IDEA OF A GIANT ORGY, BUT REQUEST THAT PAUL BE TIED TO A TREE TO WHINE AND SQUIRM SADLY AS THE OTHERS HAVE A JOYFUL TIME WITHOUT HIM. THEN AFTERWARDS, JOHN CAN ATTEND TO HIM. OR RINGO. OR BRIAN. OR MAL. OR TUCKER. OR FREAKY GHOST!NICOLE. I'M NOT PICKY. NOT TOO PICKY.

Ah, I see. I'd forgotten that little fact. DO YOU KNOW WHY?

SCHOOL IS AWFUL. BUT AKSJDNFASKJDNGFKAJNGKADFJNGDFJNGDKJGNKDJF A PAUL CHAPTER? YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS I CAN'T WAIT. GIMME. LET'S HOPE HE'S SECRETLY MOODY AS FUCK AND IS THINKING BEAUTIFUL MORBID THINGS.

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miss_lizzy777 October 27 2011, 07:03:59 UTC

YAAAAAYYYYYYYYYY

I can't believe how long it's been! (I'm one to talk, right?)

I'm so happy to see this story again. And happy to see Mal!

Also, makeouts time! Also yay!

I'm worried about the thing though. TENSION. DRAMA. SEXYTIMES. I missed this story =D

macca44552 October 28 2011, 02:23:21 UTC

Yes, it has been quite awhile. Hopefully I'll be able to return to full-time posting, but I'm not sure how realistic that is, because I have school. D': I'll try, though. And the break between chapters won't be this long again.

AND I'VE MISSED YOU. *hugs*

larainefan October 27 2011, 15:16:29 UTC

So glad you're posting again ( ... )

macca44552 October 28 2011, 02:29:11 UTC

Hello! It's good to see you again; I haven't been around here in ages.

Ah, it always makes me feel so happy when you say that I have their voice down pat--especially George's. I find his voice the hardest to master, because there are so many different sides to him and they're all so...subtle. Does that make sense? Anyway, thanks for your kind words!

Unfortunately, in my head I've got John sleeping in the hut when they get there, so no sexytimes (plus, I didn't want them to have at it while George was drunk. XD). But the George/Ringo sex will come soon, actually. They have attained a nice balance.

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