Comments | lylark: Fic: Weak (Aki/Mao) [NC-17]

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Fic: Weak (Aki/Mao) [NC-17]

Aug 12, 2011 12:24

Title: Weak
Chapters: One-shot
Author: lylark
Genre: AU, smut
Warnings: Language, smut
Rating: NC-17
Pairings/Characters: Aki/Mao (Sadie)
Synopsis: The light pink hue forming on his cheeks, the averting of his eyes, the biting of his lower lip-- Aki's long pale fingers brushing his lower lip, gently touching and playing with the lip-chain like it was far more ( Read more... )

fic: weak, pair: aki/mao, one-shot, rating: nc-17, genre: au, genre: smut, !band: sadie, !fandom: jrock, requests

Comments 6

in_circus August 14 2011, 03:47:12 UTC

:DDDD
That. Was. Awesome. Hoooly shit.

I told you you're an amazing writer!

Oooohhh, omg. Thatwassogreat.

lylark August 14 2011, 19:48:54 UTC

Aww, you really think so? I thought I completely failed your request, but I'm really glad you liked this! It makes me really happy~ (>/////<)

resuai September 22 2011, 19:36:54 UTC

Not bad. Not bad at all.
I liked the little switches between shy and certain on Mao, especially that it wasn't overdone.

lylark September 23 2011, 01:07:57 UTC

Thank you for reading and your lovely comment! I really appreciate it! :)

resuai September 23 2011, 09:40:39 UTC

You're very welcome darling :3

lylark September 23 2011, 21:02:48 UTC

<3 :DD ^^