It's great to see an Italian writer of fanfiction for the Italian plays... and there are so many of them... I'm very pleased to see this story here and I say again - that twist at the end took me completely by surprise, but it seems so inevitable now!
You've got the gift of saying a lot with a few words. I'm looking forward to seeing more stories from your quill-pen!
Thank you : D and thank you for your kind help <3! I'll surely write more about Shakespeare's plays. Something about Two gentlemen of Verona and Juliet and Romeo because... well, I live in Veron X3 it seems inevitable.
I remember reading Othello for class and really enjoying it. I always did think maybe Iago was jealous of Desdemona, which is why he acted the way he did. You did a great job writing for this pair. :)
You're incredibly good with very few words--your concision is your strength; every word counts. I particularly love the feverish sense you've built here, cool air on hot skin and blood on the ground and on Iago's hand. Just beautiful work.
Thank you! <3 And it's all hyarrowen's merit because without her help the story would be just a mix of words in strange expression directly translated from Italian X3
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You've got the gift of saying a lot with a few words. I'm looking forward to seeing more stories from your quill-pen!
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I'll surely write more about Shakespeare's plays. Something about Two gentlemen of Verona and Juliet and Romeo because... well, I live in Veron X3 it seems inevitable.
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Slash fiction is very educational.
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Great work, spectacular even.
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Thank you!
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Thank you :*D
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And it's all hyarrowen's merit because without her help the story would be just a mix of words in strange expression directly translated from Italian X3
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