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Re: MAINSAIL CHALLENGE reverie47 October 21 2011, 20:39:14 UTC
cont ( ... )

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Re: MAINSAIL CHALLENGE lha October 22 2011, 13:20:11 UTC
Your portrayal of their comfortable relationship here is lovely as is the legnths to which they'll go to get a moment alone ;)

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Re: MAINSAIL CHALLENGE akachankami October 22 2011, 20:26:43 UTC
“I know, soon it will be far too cold for this. And I always enjoy the outdoors.” *giggle*
that was hot! but the last line ç_ç *sigh*

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Re: MAINSAIL CHALLENGE frakcancer October 22 2011, 21:50:27 UTC
Their intimacy in this story -- both sexually and emotionally -- is wonderful. He knows what she means when they are together in the dark, he knows what she means when they talk; they have their routines and rituals as lovers and again as friends.

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Re: MAINSAIL CHALLENGE ellie987 October 26 2011, 11:33:20 UTC
Fantastic piece. The first part is so exciting for the secrecy of it all and the stolen touches in the dark, but it's also so very intimate and familiar. Just like the second part. It's so good to see them knowing each other so well after all these years. So much that not even words are needed.

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