Haunted - blue_icy_rose

[blue_icy_rose]

Title: Haunted
Author: blue_icy_roseRating: Hard R to NC-17

Comments

[elizalavelle]

Great work, I liked that you took a unique angle to the caught challenge ;)

[blue_icy_rose]

Thank you! Glad you liked!

[taken_with_you]

Caught masturbating by the Donut! Ha.

Given her "rape," I'm not sure that Veronica would just lie back with her eyes closed without knowing who was touching her...but then again, it would only have been one of two people, so maybe she would.

Excellent descriptive prose, my favorite part: "Don't you dare stop," she ordered between gasps.

"Really wasn't planning to."

Eeee! Thanks for the Christmas goodie!

[blue_icy_rose]

Hmm...I have to admit that I didn't think of the "rape" at all when I wrote this, I just figured she'd be so caught up in memories that it would only barely register with her.

Ah, yes...I do so love torturing the Donut right now. LOL

And you're welcome! And thank you for the wonderful feedback!

[blue_icy_rose]

Yes, my "mystery visitor" wasn't so mystery was it? I just figured people could hope it would be Logan. *nods* I certainly would in Veronica's position. Thanks for the great feedback, I'm so glad you liked it!

And really, I don't think anyone can blame Veronica for not being able to forget Logan.

[jaded_icy_rose]

Wonderful job. I do wish Logan was there to...ahem. I'll leave that open. LOL.

And I loved the angle you took it from ^_^ Great job.

[blue_icy_rose]

I'm sure Veronica was wishing that Logan was there as well. I know I would. LOL

And thank you! *g* Glad you liked it! *runs off to read chapter you just sent me*

[truemyth]

I really like this. Your prose was very sensual and it was a nice take on the challenge topic. I think you are continuing to grow as a writer. Well done!