Comments | lovdeve_haney: Jitters

lovdeve_haney

Apr 25, 2008 17:34

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freakyfied April 25 2008, 15:51:42 UTC

i think it's still veh raw. haha. make it less informal. like "i know its a male ego thing" change it to "it's the male ego" or sth.

lovdeve_haney April 25 2008, 15:53:23 UTC

hmm.. okie.. i'l kip dat in mind.. i stil nid to draft mre.

lovdeve_haney April 25 2008, 15:55:51 UTC

oh yah.. thxie jarrel.. muackz!

freakyfied April 25 2008, 16:19:15 UTC

hahah wth. and ur ending. made me go "wtf" tim-style.

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