Slay me, Save me. Chapter 7: ...He travels fastest who travels alone (part 2)

[louisj]

Title:  Slay me,  Save me
Chapter 7:...He travels fastest who travels alone (part  2)
Pairing: Spike, Adam, Angel
Rating:  NC17 
Summary:  Spike learns his LA cop may have been economical with the truth about Angel.  Sparks fly as the desperate vampire seeks to distance himself from the one person who believed in him.   
Disclaimer: I don't own any of

Comments

[roxyr1]

Ooh ooh, aah aah! Just about to log out when I decided to check lj and sooo glad I did. Having to dash and will read at home. Can't wait! XXX

[louisj]

Hope you enjoy the ride, love. (the fic not the underground).

[cherron1]

A very eventful chapter, hun. How cruel can Spike be? But then again, maybe Adam did have a hidden agenda and isn't as innocent as he makes out. Still,it was painful to read how hurt he was and Spike's turmoil inflicting that hurt.

This is so well writted, I felt i was actually there in that very intimate exchange between the two men and as for the ending, that left me feeling sad. Cheer me up in the next chapter with news of Angel?

And Spike in Sunnydale, hey? Who's his 'old adversary'? Buffy? (I hope not). Xander (maybe). Giles (yes, please). :D

[louisj]

Maybe, but I think he was genuinely naive about the importance of the intel. (and maybe he was so into Spike, his rational thoughts were confused).

Thanks for the comments, it was hard getting the vampire to be mean, especially as i had writted them getting close, but a new chapter in Spike's journey is about to happen. As to who he drops in on - you'll just have to wait. Tee hee.

[cherron1]

Meant to ask...did you get my last two manips posted to your myspace page? Do you want any alterations? (Hungry for feedback and praise, here)

[louisj]

I did, lovely one and they are gorgeous. Sorry for not replying. The first one is just perfect for a future chapter with...now that would be spoiling things.

[roxyr1]

I've just read and re-read this chapter and as usual am thrilled by your ability to move me. First to tears of laughter at the exchange between vampire and human and then as Spike realises he must take the next part of his journey alone. Make someone hate you? That's so much easier said than done, believe me, I know. Adam's hurt and then his need to hurt back was painful as was Spike's turmoil in deciding to take that course of action. The last paragraph of poor Adam catatonic and helpless finished me off. You are too cruel. :) But, I love that you can move a 30 yr old Mother of one in this way.

[louisj]

Thankee kindly, sweetie. Sorry for finishing you off with the last paragraph (no, I'm not, I like to tease and be cruel). The next chapter may brighten things up as Spike's journey takes him to Sunnydale, but then again, it may throw up a new set of problems.

[roxyr1]

Monster! Just for that, I'm going to go back and comment on all your chapters to make you work and think about what you're doing. Tee Hee, Ha ha!

[louisj]

I'm still on-line, sweetheart, and I know where you live. Be afraid...be very afraid. (manic laugh)

[ohwliag]

I am really glad that Spike has left Adam and can get on with finding Angel. He can not just leave him there being tortured so horrifically. Personally I would like to see how Angels doing, perhaps in the next chapter (please, please)

Love and Hugs

[louisj]

Spike has a few adventures to go as he ends up in Sunnydale, but there will always be news of Angel. (How could Spike or indeed, anyone, forget the Master Vampire, angel).

thanks for the comment.