Cookies and Cream for inthekeyofd

[zelda_zee]

Title: Cookies and Cream
Author: haldoor
Recipient: inthekeyofd
Pairing or Characters: Jack/Sawyer
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Questionable food hygiene at worst!
Prompt: Jack/Sawyer, AU, baking Christmas cookies
Summary: Jack bakes cookies and Sawyer wants to check they're edible
Author notes: No spoilers, no connection to the island; just two guys living together

Comments

[inthekeyofd]

I LOVE IT!!!

You took baking cookies from something simple and made it not only HOT..seriously, Sawyer does have one hell of a way to pass ten minutes..to something completely romantic--Jack teaching him how to make them, to absolutely sweet--telling or not telling someone who exactly made them..their OWN tradition.

And AND AND you not only worked in the hotness...but you managed to work in WHITE which you know I love. :)

You totally got both their voices down perfectly too, I love it when Sawyer was circling those cookies like a shark and the snarkiness..and like I've said, his way to pass the time is just pure joy. :)

THANK YOU SO MUCH, it's EXACTLY what I wanted, it was romantic, hot, sweet and perfectly them.

[haldoor]

So very pleased to have been of service! The boys started sniffing at me as soon as the mods asked for a pinch-hitter, so I'm very very pleased to have been able to fulfill your wishes so well! Thanks for your great comments! ;-)

[zelda_zee]

This was such a fun fic! I really enjoyed the hotness and the holiday sweetness too. Lovely job!

[haldoor]

Thank you, my dear! It was just asking to be written. ;-)