In the Forest of the Night for eponine119

Dec 23, 2009 17:36

Title: In the Forest of the Night
Author: jenthegypsy
Recipient: eponine119
Rating: PG, in a Brothers Grimm sort of way.
Characters: Juliet, Sawyer, Ben.
Word Count: 3714
Warnings: Sometimes bad things happen in fairy tales, but they aren't always what they seem.
Summary: See entry under Warnings.
Authors Notes: Prompt: Sawyer/Juliet, fairy tale. I had to make ( Read more... )

lost hohoho 2009: fic

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ozmissage December 23 2009, 18:28:13 UTC
THIS IS BRILLIANT.

I just I want to leave a coherent comment but there's nothing I could say that would do this justice. It's just stunning and beautiful and it's so them. Incredible. Absolutely, incredible.

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jenthegypsy January 23 2010, 02:50:29 UTC
Being moved to incoherence is good - thanks for commenting!

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primarycolors92 December 23 2009, 19:00:55 UTC
I love this in a way that is entirely indecent.

BEST. THING. EVER.

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jenthegypsy January 23 2010, 02:49:55 UTC
VERY. MANY. THANKS. Appreciate your comment!

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eponine119 December 23 2009, 21:01:08 UTC
OH MY GOD. You are a genius! I love this so so so so so much. ♥ I am the luckiest girl in the fanfic world today.

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jenthegypsy January 23 2010, 02:48:49 UTC
Thanks! Glad you liked it ~

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bold_seer December 23 2009, 22:55:16 UTC
Ah, Blake!

I bow to your sharp wit, your wonderful imagination and your poetic skills! Truly.

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jenthegypsy January 23 2010, 02:48:22 UTC
Thought "Tiger, Tiger Burning Bright" was too obvious, but good on you for recognizing the reference to Blake! Many thanks - I appreciate your taking the time to comment!

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elliotsmelliot December 24 2009, 13:55:34 UTC
This is gorgeous and unbelievably creative. There were so many fitting phrases and words that joined together two fairytale worlds. I love it all - the rhymes, the voices, the nicknames, the imagery, and the tiger who can change his stripes.

Juliet stared down at the union she saw
Of two fragile hands and one massive paw,
And her eyes welled with tears as she realized just then
That in this creature of magic she'd at last found a friend.

As it should be!

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jenthegypsy January 23 2010, 02:47:04 UTC
Thank you so much for your detailed comment - I really appreciate you taking the time to tell me what made this special for you! ♥

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