Fic - Things Grimlock Gave Us

Dec 30, 2010 14:36

Title: Things Grimlock Gave Us
Continuity: G1 cartoon, Dysfunction AU
Rating: PG
Content advice: hints at combat-type violence of the kind seen in the cartoon, some light Cybertronian swearing, friendship and teamwork, slightly fluffy, slightly cracky.
Disclaimer: Not mine, just giving the Technobots a bit of much-deserved attention
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au: dysfunction, afterburner, series: him grimlock, lightspeed, strafe, perceptor, scattershot, nosecone, grimlock, continuity: g1

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caiusmajor December 30 2010, 17:04:10 UTC
Awww, this is really sweet! I am shocked! ;)

I loved Perceptor. And the fishing. And Grimlock having the answer.

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ultharkitty December 30 2010, 17:54:13 UTC
lol! Apparently, I do more than just darkfic?

Yay! Thankyou! I'm really glad you liked it :D

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minibot_love December 30 2010, 19:15:18 UTC
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww~! Daddy!Grimmy is so protective of his babies~~ <3<3

So sweet! <3

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ultharkitty December 30 2010, 23:05:05 UTC
Glad you think so :D

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eerian_sadow December 30 2010, 20:53:41 UTC
oh, this is beautiful! i loved how distinct all their personalities were, and how you conveyed how new they really were. and Grimlock was so lovely here! all those little flashes that showed just how he really could have been so smart in there after all, and how much he cared about the Technobots.

this whole piece was just a joy to read! excellent work, darling. :D

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ultharkitty December 30 2010, 23:10:23 UTC
Yay, thankyou! :D

I'm really glad they came across as distinct. Took me ages re-watching 'Grimlock's New Brain' and referring back to the Wiki, trying to get that right!

And yay Grimlock too! I reckon he'd do well as a creator, considering what he's been through.

Thanks again! ♥

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playswithworms December 30 2010, 22:07:31 UTC
<33333333333333 ZOMG LOVE THIS SO MUCH! <333333333333333333

“NO IT ISN’T!” Perceptor screamed from somewhere up ahead. “I recalibrated you, you stupid machine!”
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! *rolls about* Poor Perceptor, trying to calm the machines AND a bunch of twitchy, battle-ready Technobots XD

Moderately pliant recharge stations! Oh, the joy! XD I love how you capture the mindset of beings created and shoved willy nilly into the world. Adult and fully functional, but still so many new things to figure out :D

And Nosecone, discovering all the wisdom Grimlock has to share with them even though he isn't super smart anymore - just lovely and wonderfully done! And that little moment with Grimlock reassuring Strafe was pure love <3333333333333

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ultharkitty December 30 2010, 23:18:38 UTC
*has a very big grin and a lot of squee* Thankyou! :D ♥

I'm so glad you enjoyed this :D And that Perceptor made you laugh (I'm always relieved when the stuff that makes me laugh makes other people laugh too!).

Re. mechs coming online for the first time as adult consciousnesses: \o/ For some reason, I'm just fascinated by that theme. It must be so weird, knowing things because they're written into basic programming, but not having actually known them.

*wants to snuggle Grimlock*

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tainry December 31 2010, 09:36:10 UTC
Eeeeeee!!! Oh this is marvelous! Oh, Nosecone ilu! <3 ::ROFFLES at Perceptor:: XDDD Absolutely delightful, the whole shebang! <3333

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ultharkitty December 31 2010, 10:19:48 UTC
Squeeeee, thankyou! I'm really glad you enjoyed it :D

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