I am utterly in love with this story and I am so happy that you filled it. It was EXACTLY what I wanted with my request and I can't really think of words beyond that I love it.
Though it might be the lack of coherence caused by it being 3.20AM. That said, I will probably re-read this and maybe comment more intelligently.
I think I would have to- do something, write something for you cause really that's all I can offer, if you continued this. But even if you didn't, I know I'm bound to re-read it over cause I love it so.
(and wow, I sound no more intelligent at 8PM then after 3AM, haha)
Awww..This was so cute! Luke's POV was great, you capture that awkward teenager's voice nicely. Also, if you do 'spawn some sequels' it would be awesome!
"Come out. Of the kitchen, that is." << Nearly died laughing! :D
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Though it might be the lack of coherence caused by it being 3.20AM. That said, I will probably re-read this and maybe comment more intelligently.
Thank you so much for writing it <3
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(and wow, I sound no more intelligent at 8PM then after 3AM, haha)
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Peter would benefit a lot from acting like Luke's big brother, I think. It could help sort of fill in the hole Nathan left.
But anyway, thank you for reading.
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Thanks for reading. :)
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"Come out. Of the kitchen, that is." << Nearly died laughing! :D
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Thanks for reading and commenting. :)
I think I will write some sequels, yeah.
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I love the domestic heroes atmosphere! They're so cute...
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I think Luke would mellow out if he actually had a semi normal existence with people who treated him well. You know?
Which is sort of what I'm trying with this.
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