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OP here a_little_push March 13 2010, 11:18:15 UTC
I am utterly in love with this story and I am so happy that you filled it. It was EXACTLY what I wanted with my request and I can't really think of words beyond that I love it.

Though it might be the lack of coherence caused by it being 3.20AM. That said, I will probably re-read this and maybe comment more intelligently.

Thank you so much for writing it <3

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Re: OP here lornrocks March 13 2010, 18:47:18 UTC
I'm so glad you liked it! As I said, I might continue it, I have this storyline that's been lingering in my head for a while. So we'll see. :)

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Re: OP here a_little_push March 14 2010, 04:08:40 UTC
I think I would have to- do something, write something for you cause really that's all I can offer, if you continued this. But even if you didn't, I know I'm bound to re-read it over cause I love it so.

(and wow, I sound no more intelligent at 8PM then after 3AM, haha)

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Re: OP here lornrocks March 14 2010, 04:16:56 UTC
Well I love your Power of the Mind series, so if you keep writing that, I'll be very happy and be inspired to write more. :)

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curgypsy March 13 2010, 15:37:23 UTC
Sylar watching White Collar...for some reason I find that so funny. I like the thought of Peter being a kind of big brother to Luke. Cool story.

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lornrocks March 13 2010, 18:46:27 UTC
Mostly I did that cause ZQ and Matt Bomer are besties in real life, apparently.

Peter would benefit a lot from acting like Luke's big brother, I think. It could help sort of fill in the hole Nathan left.

But anyway, thank you for reading.

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treehouse_kid March 13 2010, 20:34:24 UTC
I really love the close call bit, lol. Made me giggle!

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lornrocks March 13 2010, 21:29:38 UTC
Ha, thank you.

Thanks for reading. :)

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sara_no_h March 13 2010, 23:51:56 UTC
Awww..This was so cute! Luke's POV was great, you capture that awkward teenager's voice nicely. Also, if you do 'spawn some sequels' it would be awesome!

"Come out. Of the kitchen, that is." << Nearly died laughing! :D

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lornrocks March 14 2010, 00:03:06 UTC
Oh, gotta love double entendres.

Thanks for reading and commenting. :)

I think I will write some sequels, yeah.

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xenasoul March 14 2010, 07:33:56 UTC
Fics with Luke are always so interesting even if he's a brat!
I love the domestic heroes atmosphere! They're so cute...

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lornrocks March 14 2010, 07:42:17 UTC
So cute. It's my favorite, domestic Heroes.

I think Luke would mellow out if he actually had a semi normal existence with people who treated him well. You know?

Which is sort of what I'm trying with this.

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