Heat-Wave in the Hub - Day One Challenge Fic

[lonerstarlight]

The sunlight streamed through the trees, casting dancing shadows along the path. Children played in the parks whilst parents watched over them. The jingle of an Ice-Cream Van could be heard as it drove along the Bay. Tourists searched for places to go during this rare scorching heat. The chime of a bell could be heard as the door opened revealing a

Comments

[insevens]

You've caught all the character voices terrifically, and I love the ending! Lovely stuff! :D

[lonerstarlight]

Thanks you and your the first person to ever comment my work so thank you!

[cprefect]

I have read all five, okay in backwards order!! LOL wonderful!!

[lonerstarlight]

lol thanks a lot!

[bandgeek01]

lovely :-)

Nicole

[lonerstarlight]

thanks