Comments | lomonaaeren: Chapter Thirty-One of 'For Our Unconquerable Souls'- What Is True

lomonaaeren

Chapter Thirty-One of 'For Our Unconquerable Souls'- What Is True

Jan 22, 2009 22:43

novel-length, harry/draco, mystery, angst, for their unconquerable souls, lucius/narcissa, unusual career!draco, unusual career!harry, rated r or nc-17, sequels, romance, ewe

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ravenqueen55 January 23 2009, 04:05:37 UTC

That was beautiful and hot and wonderful and lovely... and also fun and playful. The combination of all those things is difficult to achieve, I think, but you did it so masterfully. Fabulous!

lomonaaeren January 24 2009, 21:46:28 UTC

Thank you! In this case, it really helped that I was working with a rewritten scene; I had time to think about Draco's reactions and not just his actions, if that makes sense.

tray_la_la January 23 2009, 04:14:43 UTC

GUUUUUUUH *is ded*

lomonaaeren January 24 2009, 21:46:37 UTC

Thank you!

fauxpersonae007 January 23 2009, 06:03:09 UTC

I don't think saying utterly fantastic is enough but I'll say it anyway.

Utterly fantastic.

Loved it from Draco's point of view.

lomonaaeren January 24 2009, 21:46:46 UTC

Thank you!

sethra2000 January 23 2009, 07:18:40 UTC

Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm *thud* *ded*

lomonaaeren January 24 2009, 21:46:53 UTC

Thanks!

kawanale January 23 2009, 08:54:58 UTC

whhoooohoooo, hot man sex and harry gives as good as he gets, doesn't he? that's why draco was surprised, but then again he surprised harry so all is well in the end, no pun intended, hehe.

lomonaaeren January 24 2009, 21:47:25 UTC

Thank you!

Draco is way too used to thinking that, once he tops someone, that person lies there and takes it. He should have known better, but, as you said, Harry always surprises him.