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cheshyre January 14 2009, 00:29:46 UTC
I'm really loving Narcissa's perspective in these scenes.

I hope you'll keep the door open to more stories in this setting after you finish this work.

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lomonaaeren January 19 2009, 12:14:11 UTC
Thank you!

I may keep the door open, as you say, but at the moment, I really don't know what else I could write set in this universe.

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thedogberry January 14 2009, 00:37:56 UTC
Excellent as always. In particular, I liked this line:

It is all very well to talk of the conflict of love and duty, the way Mudbloods do, but they say little of the conflict of love against love.

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lomonaaeren January 19 2009, 12:14:37 UTC
Thank you.

And, of course, there are "Mudbloods" who say that. Narcissa just hasn't been reading/listening to the right people. Even she is limited. :)

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star_faerie January 14 2009, 00:52:45 UTC
Wow.

Narcissa was awesome again.

Draco was too.

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lomonaaeren January 19 2009, 12:14:46 UTC
Thank you!

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valkyrie17 January 14 2009, 03:10:50 UTC
Ahh...nice. Sweet that Narcissa and Draco both want revenge, but don't want to upset harry :)

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lomonaaeren January 19 2009, 12:15:21 UTC
Thank you!

Narcissa, at least, has understood that their revenge would upset Harry more than help him. It remains to be seen if Draco reaches that point.

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yanagi_wa January 14 2009, 04:14:28 UTC
I love the little glances of Narcissa's inner workings. Harry and Draco make a great team. Wonder what Lucius is going to make of all this. This is so good. Wonderful work. Thank you.

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lomonaaeren January 19 2009, 12:15:37 UTC
Thank you!

At the moment, Lucius is rather disgruntled, but he'll have to admit he was fairly outplayed.

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