At Last!

[lomeriel]

It took me forever and a day. It's only the first chapter of what will be several. Inexplicably, my crack pairing fic developed plot and demanded chapters.

But at long last, I present my currently untitled Demyx/Sora crackfic, Chapter 1. Huge thanks to my lovely beta, rhaella.

Warnings: I have played through Kingdom Hearts and Kingdom Hearts II

Comments

[imasupermuteant]

I love you. Seriously. I...

... words fail me... it makes me go >_<

This is my new OTP... like it was before... only now it's more of a *mascot* OTP *nodnod* The bella mascot is now demyx and sora (sitting in a tree etc.)

<3!

[lomeriel]

Am glad you like! Guess I'll keep going with it, then.

[rhaella]

<333

Love the extended ending. ^_^

[lomeriel]

<3 back.

I tried to extend the beginning, really I did. But nothing I put ahead seemed to mesh properly, extended the middle broke the clipped "flow," and I didn't want to extend it. Thanks again.

[stvincent]

X3 Yaaay, Demyx and Sora. (I'm really wishing I had a KH icon right now ... should really update those avatars ....) Um, so yes, basically this is amazing and you should write more now (except hitman porn come first, 'cause, well, gah), and I love the notecards (and the fact that Xigbar and Luxord were the ones to write them out for Demyx, XDDD). You did a good job capturing Demyx's character, I think - that bizarre mix of coward and bad guy that make him so interesting. Also, the surreal strangeness of this relationship taking place in actual game timeline was very evident, too. Basically, job well done, and can i haz mor nao plz?

[imasupermuteant]

Have I told you lately that I love you? and want more of this fic. because I do. screw thesis, this fic is where it's at.