Comments | littlehands: Fic: Driftwood (2/2)

littlehands

Fic: Driftwood (2/2)

Oct 26, 2004 18:22

So here it is, all that hard work and suffering for one little fic. *sigh* I think it turned out okay, given that we don't have a lot to go by, it can be frustrating to write in a new fandom. I want to be all canon and stuff, but it's hard when there isn't very much of it, more so with Lost then other shows ( Read more... )

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autobadgirl October 26 2004, 19:07:25 UTC

She’s counting the stars, even though her eyes are closed.

One, his fingers slip under the sides of her underwear, hips jump a little bit, belly flip-flops. Five, the blanket is soft under bare body, legs open, eyes still closed. Thirteen, his stubble against her thigh, contrary sensations, lingering.

That part is bloody brilliant.

Damn, I wish I'd written it.

Kudos, Lia.

littlehands October 26 2004, 19:50:25 UTC

*blush* I've never been 'bloody brilliant' before, and I kinda like it! You are a great writer, so coming from you, your words mean a bunch to me. 'Cause you know I have the autobadgirl fic shrine, with candles and such ...
Naw, really, thanks!

autobadgirl October 27 2004, 21:43:41 UTC

A shrine pour moi? ::is immensely flattered::

And you are most welcome.

littlehands October 28 2004, 13:21:08 UTC

Oh yes, the shrine, takes up like half my room. Heh ... Thanks for the rec too!

call_me_cash October 26 2004, 21:25:56 UTC

That fic was so many different things, I can't even begin to describe it. It was beautifully written and the imagery was incredible. Plus who doesn't love some well-written Jack and Kate smut, very hot.

Great job.

littlehands October 28 2004, 13:22:38 UTC

Thankies. Such kind words, makes me happy. Who doesn't like smut? I'm all for the island porn, ya know.

withinveritas October 27 2004, 00:19:21 UTC

So simple and perfect. I loved both parts. Lovely.

littlehands October 28 2004, 13:23:09 UTC

Thankies, always nice to see a new face. In the metaphoical sense ...

withinveritas October 28 2004, 23:12:39 UTC

-grins-

brandyleigh October 27 2004, 01:14:22 UTC

He’s just one of the mythical guys her friends use to talk about, the nice ones.
I love this.

This part was also great. Smutty, yet sweet, and I love how they interact.

slayer007 October 27 2004, 21:36:24 UTC

found a link from lost-forums.com, fantastic fic! i loved it..you write jack and kate really well!

littlehands October 28 2004, 07:48:48 UTC

Thanks! Could you send me a link for you found the rec? Be cool to see!