Heart of a Hero

Mar 30, 2019 09:56

B2MeM Prompt:.I24 Setting as character- Closed in Spaces. Person vs self- Making tough choices.
Format: short story
Genre: drama, angst, hurt/comfort
Rating: PG13
Warnings: attempted sexual assault, derogatory language, violence.
Characters:Aragorn, OMCS, OFC
Pairings: None
Creator's Notes; Events follow those in “A Blustery Day” but the story can ( Read more... )

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mrowe March 30 2019, 14:46:57 UTC
Well done!

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lindahoyland March 30 2019, 18:15:06 UTC
Thank you.

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shirebound March 30 2019, 15:11:19 UTC
“Ornedil might have the mind of a child, but he has the heart of a hero.”

What a wonderful observation of this good-hearted child-man. I like this story very much, Linda, and Thorongil's solution will benefit everyone.

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amethyst_witch March 30 2019, 15:22:25 UTC
That last line killed me, too ^_^

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lindahoyland March 30 2019, 18:16:04 UTC
Thank you so much. I was fearful you might not like this one as it is dark in places but am glad it worked for you.

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amethyst_witch March 30 2019, 15:19:46 UTC
WOW!!

Linda, I punched the desk TWICE reading this, and then cried at the end. This was a wonderful read from start to finish.
One of my Top 5 Faves so far. I actually read it aloud to Scott here just now and he really loved it, too ^_^

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lindahoyland March 30 2019, 18:18:00 UTC
Thank you so much. I'm delighted you enjoyed this and Scott too.I enjoyed writing about Aragorn punching the would be rapist... Which were your other favourites?

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amethyst_witch March 30 2019, 21:47:14 UTC
He deserved it and much worse. To do that (or try) to a woman...and with her child in the next room! :(
*blood boils*
Thank Gaia for the good men of the world <3

Oh that's tough--I've enjoyed them all! But if I must choose, my first favourite is The Pied Piper of Gondor ^_^
Then, Of Seas and Sheep and Nightmares and Farewell to Gondor are tied for second! I think third would have to be At the Sign of the Great Whale <3 OH and don't forget The Thief! LOVED that one <3 Made me cry.

*hugs*
:)

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lindahoyland March 31 2019, 03:52:59 UTC
Thank you, hugs back. I might put up a poll next week to see what others liked.

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amethyst_witch March 30 2019, 15:24:16 UTC
Sidenote: I wish I could work in the House of Healing!!

^_^

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lindahoyland March 30 2019, 18:52:35 UTC
amethyst_witch March 30 2019, 21:47:47 UTC
Ohh thank you thank you!

<333

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elenbarathi March 31 2019, 01:43:37 UTC
So excellent!!! Ha, good to see Thorongil punch rapist scum in the face, and huzzah for courageous Ornedil, who may turn out to be a more effective bodyguard than anyone - even Thorongil - might expect. Somebody ought to give him some proper lessons with that wooden sword, or better still, with a staff - he's tall and strong; he'd be good with a staff, once he got the hang of it.

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lindahoyland March 31 2019, 12:15:30 UTC
Thank you so much. I enjoy writing Thorongil punch the would be rapist. I'm sure Ecthelion will listen to Thorongil's suggestions for suitable punishment. A wooden staff would be a great weapon for Ornedil.

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