Fic: Breathe

Nov 03, 2008 18:44

Title: Breathe
Author: Corona
Fandom: Primeval
Pairing: Nick/Ryan
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: In no way mine or anything to do with me. I own nothing.
Summary: His shoulder thuds into a locker, tips him sideways, and leaves the grey surface spattered with red.
AN: For fredbassett 's prompt 'difficult day' it got a tiny bit gory Fred, I hope you don't mind.
Breathe )

primeval: nick/ryan, primeval, rating: pg-13, genre: slash, word count: 500-1500

Leave a comment

Comments 36

fredbassett November 3 2008, 19:14:57 UTC
It's utterly gorgeous, even though it is rather red!

And then he's just Captain Ryan again, serious and competent and efficient

He is! And we love him for it!!

BTW, would you be so kind to post it to Denial as well? We've had withdrawal symptoms from your lovely fic.

Reply

entangled_now November 3 2008, 19:22:26 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad it's ok, I didn't know it was going to be that red until it came out and I was worried you wouldn't like it :)

Captain Ryan wins everything when it comes to hotness vs efficiency, especially in uniform.

Of course I will! And I think I was just about ready to write something for the fandom again :D

Oh and I almost forgot! Thank you for your lovely rec for Pollination the other day.

Reply

fredbassett November 3 2008, 19:33:30 UTC
You're very welcome! Pollination was the very first thing I had in my favourites and I still enjoy re-reading it.

Primeval fandom welcomes you back to the fold!

Reply

entangled_now November 3 2008, 19:53:03 UTC
I have to admit Pollination is probably my favourite fic I've written in this fandom. It was just a stream of amusing dirtiness :D

Reply


miya_morana November 3 2008, 19:15:08 UTC
Awww! I love it!
Seriously, it made me all warm and fuzzy inside, at the end.
As usual, it's beautifully written. :)

Reply

entangled_now November 3 2008, 19:28:11 UTC
Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked it. I was trying for a little bit of hurt/comfort, though there was more blood than I expected in the fic!

Reply


lukadreaming November 3 2008, 19:40:06 UTC
Fabulous story. I particularly love your portrayal of Ryan!

Reply

entangled_now November 3 2008, 19:53:54 UTC
Thank you very much, and it's been a while since I wrote Ryan so I appreciate that.

Reply


deinonychus_1 November 3 2008, 20:03:05 UTC
oooh, angsty and wet and bloody, but very good. nice contrast of Nick being so lost and out of it against Ryan's calm efficiency.

Reply

entangled_now November 3 2008, 20:06:48 UTC
Thank you, I did worry it was too bloody but it wanted to be like that, and I do like lost Nick, Ryan never really got to scoop up his team and take care of them in the show...but I like to think he would have done.

Reply


telperion_15 November 3 2008, 20:34:18 UTC
This is very...um...well...I think fabulous might be the word!

Bloody would also apply!

Reply

entangled_now November 4 2008, 07:41:10 UTC
Why thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

I have no idea where all the blood came from!

Reply


Leave a comment

Up