Fic: Break, Break

[entangled_now]

Title: Break, Break
Fandom: Supernatural
Pairing: Dean/Castiel
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Slight gore
Spoilers: All of season 4
Disclaimer: In no way mine, or anything to do with me, I own nothing.
Summary: Castiel comes back broken.
AN: comment!fic written for dmlpacker

Comments

[aesc]

*heartclench* Oh, this was lovely--visceral, painful, not just because of Castiel's pain but Dean feeling he's not supposed to have what Castiel's promising him. And, of course, Castiel giving it anyway, and Dean being unable to refuse it. So perfect ♥

[entangled_now]

Thank you so much for your lovely comment, that's exactly what I was trying for at the end, so I'm really pleased it worked for you. Thank you for reading.

[mushishi7]

Guh... I wish this could be longer. I wish that in the coming season when Dean saw Castiel alive, he would be as moved as in this one.
Come on, Kripke, let them hug at least!

[entangled_now]

Thank you! I was tempted to make it longer, I was having fun with the idea, but it was supposed to be comment!fic. I'm really glad you liked it :)

I know what you mean, I would settle for a hug, a good hug, just as long as we get something.

[ellie_i]

Oh, lovely. It's so hard and yet soft at the same time, and Dean's peculiar acceptance of what he thinks he doesn't deserve left me clutching my heart.

[entangled_now]

Thank you so much, I really wanted it to be broken but kind of sweet at the same time, I'm really pleased it worked for you :)

[louiex]

Dude, this is just... yeah I'm just sitting here making appreciative murmuring sounds that I'm having a hard time spelling out here~ Desperate, ohhhh so Dean with all that affection and passion a millimeter beneath his skin and it would take Castiel's skin parting to finally show that emotion off.

Gorgeous!!

[entangled_now]

Thank you very much! I really wanted it to feel a little hard and desperate around the edges, so I'm pleased it worked for you. I loved the idea that Castiel breaking would really get under Dean's skin.

[lee_ashburn]

This is so good! Raw, emotional and gripping. Kudos!

[entangled_now]

Thank you very much, that's really nice of you, I'm pleased you liked it!