Fic: Break, Break

[entangled_now]

Title: Break, Break
Fandom: Supernatural
Pairing: Dean/Castiel
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Slight gore
Spoilers: All of season 4
Disclaimer: In no way mine, or anything to do with me, I own nothing.
Summary: Castiel comes back broken.
AN: comment!fic written for dmlpacker

Comments

[lady_macbeth_13]

This is absolutely beautiful. Wow.

"Don't do that to me again," Dean says fiercely, lost in his own messed up fears, he didn't even know how deep he'd gone until it's right here in front of him. Right here, cold and bleeding and alive, and he's shaking and it's only half to do with the crappy motel shower gone cold before anyone could hope to be clean. "Jesus, just don't."

Castiel holds him, fingers curling tighter

"I would never," Castiel says slowly. "I would never leave, not without protest, not while you have need of me."

So heartwrenching. And Dean's reaction is just perfect.

[entangled_now]

Thank you very much, I'm really pleased it worked for you :)

[pyjamagurl]

Mmm I really rather love this. I love how descriptive it is, I can really see poor Castiel broken down and Dean tending to his wounds in the only way he knows how, and so desperate to get Castiel to respond to him.

It is a scene that feels very real, and I would love to see a similar one shown in the show as Castiel will be broken down and not quite the same as he was. I love the moment with Dean kissing him, it is such a touching, desperate moment, and I like that it brings Castiel out of his broken shell.

Lovely ^__^

[entangled_now]

Thank you very much, I just had this image of Castiel being broken in a way Dean wasn't sure he could fix, in a way that looked like it couldn't be fixed, and yet still being there. I had to climb out of the angst though, because I was asked for a romantic sort of ending.

I would really love to see something like this on the show, where Castiel is strange and different and Dean doesn't know how to fix him. Because I like to think Castiel does have strange and confusing emotions for Dean.

I'm really glad you liked it :D

[trinityofone]

This is raw and sensual and gorgeous. Lovely.

[entangled_now]

Thank you so much, that's so nice of you, I'm glad you liked it.

[juanitatequila]

Very lovely, bb. :')!

[entangled_now]

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it :D

[dotfic]

You broke him! What an evocative, powerful way to fix him, though. Gritty yet gorgeous.

[entangled_now]

It's cruel of me but I do love breaking them, and I'm really pleased you enjoyed how I fixed him, that's a lovely compliment.

Thank you for reading.