it's aliiiiiiive!

[lesinnocents]

Whew. Okay, I know it's been forever. I know. For the past year and a half, I've had terrible writer's block, and this story has been my only project throughout that time. I've tried to use it to work through my block, and though it hasn't really worked, it is, at long, long last, finally finished. I've had to re-write the ending and I'm still not

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[fictionitusxd]

That was so sad, so brilliantly written. I for seriously cried while reading this, thinking of getting old with no one there...

[lesinnocents]

Aw! As much as I'm sorry to make you cry, that's exactly what I wanted to evoke in writing this - I wanted the end, with Patrick old and alone, to be completely heartbreaking. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!