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lefaym

Fic: Unbidden

Feb 02, 2009 07:42

Title: Unbidden
Author: lefaym
Betas: jo02 who took the crappy first draft I sent her and beat it into shape with her MIGHTY SKILLZ, and used_songs who suggested some perfect finishing touches.
Fandom: Torchwood
Pairing(s): Lisa/Ianto, Jack/Ianto
Summary: Ianto tries to remember Lisa as she was.
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: RTD and the BBC own everything.
Spoilers/ ( Read more... )

torchwood, pwp, smut, lisa/ianto, myfic: 500 beta, het, myfic, slash, jack/ianto

Comments 34

laurapetri February 1 2009, 23:25:09 UTC

So sad and hot

lefaym February 2 2009, 10:56:05 UTC

Thanks-- glad you liked it. :)

used_songs February 2 2009, 00:24:40 UTC

lefaym February 2 2009, 10:56:27 UTC

jo02 February 2 2009, 02:36:07 UTC

I wish you wouldn't put yourself down - the first draft was better than a lot of stuff I see out there every day.
(But keep up the flattery, that's okay *g*)

lefaym February 2 2009, 10:57:24 UTC

Well, you shouldn't underestimate your own ability to improve a fic out of sight either. :)

Thanks.

tardistenantsue February 2 2009, 03:33:49 UTC

It should not be this hot in this room...LOL

lefaym February 2 2009, 10:57:52 UTC

Glad you enjoyed. :)

quaintheart February 2 2009, 05:55:17 UTC

whoa. loved the flipping back and forth in Ianto's mind. Brilliant idea.

Merci

lefaym February 2 2009, 10:58:46 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad it worked for you.