Update, pimpage, 3 SPN FICLETS (PG-NC-17)(All 1/1)

[landrews]

Long time, no LJ update :-) Been lurking from my phone, watching the world news with a bit of dismay, while my own corner seems to keep knocking on okay. Trying to stay focused and help when/where I can and teach my kids to stay balanced between living their lives with purpose, but not taking themselves or others too seriously. We've given up

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[ares132006]

Just super! Time Alone, ho boy! *smoking hot, bebe* Fans self. :0)

Robeson County. Heh! I can see the country boy talking. It seems to me, an older man. I like what is left unsaid, how we can fill in the details ourselves about the "boys".

Mirror, Mirror.

I like Kathy as a person, a child they saved in the past, who wants to become a hunter. She wants to join in, help the boys fight the good fight and I like that Dean has reservations, he doesn't want her to end up like Sam and himself. Whereas Sam seems willing to have Kathy join them. Does Dean have more compassion for her? I like the comparisons you have given us, between the three of them.

Lovely set of ficlets, bebe.

Thanks for the great read.

Ares

[landrews]

Hee! :HUGSyou: It feels like a long time since I've written porn, lol. I don't write much sex into my original fic and that's what I've been writing on lately.

Oh, wow! You saw the speaker in Robeson County as a man- I can see it when I went back to look- getting a reader's take always enlightens me :-)

Your question about compassion is an interesting one isn't it? There's all sorts of levels, aren't there?

Thanks for coming over!

[ares132006]

*blinks* You mean the narrator in Robeson County wasn't a man?

[landrews]

LOLOL- well, *I* wasn't thinking man, but when I looked at it like you, no you can't tell it's a woman until *maybe* the very end, and that's only if you're a Southerner and raised on church women casseroles, lolol.

[winsangel]

Great fics...love them all.

'think you're in heaven, but ya living in hell'

I know this is a line from a song, but I love how you took it and wrote so much from it.

We all know Lisa was just a temporary answer to an terminal problem - he needed his Sammy back.

This was smokin' though - Dean always knows how to satisfy the ladies.

[landrews]

Thank you! That song really lent itself to the SPN storyline with the reveal on Bobby's stairs that Dean didn't think he and Lisa were really working out as a couple. I was really trying to imagine him settling down into normal and a monogamous relationship- sex was quite possible the only thing he was really confident about going into it and then that becomes a different animal over time, too. Thanks for your comments!

[tifaching]

These were all amazing. Makes me wonder which one is yours at the comm.

I really liked the first one. The girl becoming a hunter, Dean's reluctance to let a newbie in, especially at this time. And Sam and his helpfulness, LOL.

The second was intriguing, and I liked the dialect. Last week's winner in the drabble las had something similar, a New Orleans dialect talking about Katrina.

The last was smokin' hot and ultimately heartbreaking. Poor Dean. Poor Lisa.

[landrews]

:zipslips: :-) I was happy with all these, but that damn word limit just keeels me! And then I wasn't sure at all about throwing the Lumbee dialect out there. Thank you so much for reading and feeding me. :hugs:

[cece_away]

These are all great. I esp. like the first one with the waitress and how she sees the boys and the brothers' different reactions to her.

[landrews]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed and I'm thrilled you liked that one- it's so hard to layer in background and nuance in such a short fic, it's nice to know it worked for you :-)