The Dare In The Snipe Hunt, 29/30

[landrews]

Title: The Dare In The Snipe Hunt

Comments

[ares132006]

Out on Gibson, Angela's standing beside her car, next to a mountain of State Trooper.

Your imagery is wonderful. I can *see* the huge State Trooper.

I'm loving the emotion that you've put into Brennan. She always seems so out of touch with her feelings, normal human feelings on the show, and it's great to see her frantic and afraid and doing her job because it will lead her to Booth.

[landrews]

Thanks, bebe!

I've been watching season one and back then, they let her have real feelings and attitude. She was reserved but it's obvious how deep she feels. I think they strayed a bit too far from that first season in three and four.

Can you tell how much I re-wrote on the ending? I had really rushed it before- is it too slow now?

[ares132006]

I've just read the ending. I liked it better than the original because I wanted more... and you gave us that. It has slowed it down but it also answers a few questions too.

[a2zmom]

Everything is coming together. It seems appropriate that bones are literally the driving force behind this case.

It doesn't seem like anyone (other than Brennan) is that concerned about Booth. I'm just not picking up a sense of urgency.

[landrews]

Hmmm - I'll have to look- there's more in the next chapter- you'll have to let me know at the end if you think it's balanced or not :-) My power was out for six hours last night- missed Bones and Spn! Now the wi-fi's back down- hopefully I'll get the whole story posted this weekend :-) and we'll be done- typing on this phone is hard,lolol

[fauxmaven]

You OK?

[landrews]

yayz, back up and completed- I hope you still like it by the end :-) I'm still racking my brain for loose threads.

[doc_3]

I love her interaction with these other agents. Booth "handles" her in a way, and they have no idea what to do with her. It's almost refreshing to see her blow their minds.