Jack's Capture (Part Three)

[laligin]

Grarg. I've had a headache since Thursday. I've been doing English and Classics coursework. I've been kept off the computer by my brother doing stuff for college. I've even done my homework

Comments

[shadowbyrd]

*claps*

Missed you today. Glad you felt able to finish this. I think I liked this part best. Especially shoot to kill (you minx!).

TTFN.

PS - if you feel like doing an eplilogue...maybe with them all waking up and being shot out of the sky for failing? (Time Agancy seems to be going to the dogs in Jack's absence - he just pawns them all!) Or maybe something happier. Or sinister. I can't decide!

[laligin]

Kee. I have Epilogue in mind. See, this is Happy Ending. This is where anyone can stop and go away smiling.

Epilogue = evil.

Missed you too. And am ridiculously glad you like. It's been half-typed for too long, and started to seem quite... bad. Miaow.

[gwynraven]

Nooooo! I I vote against evil epilogue. Because I won't be able to stop myself from reading the epilogue if there is one, and I want the happy ending.

[laligin]

Eeh. *considers* I could do it and hide it from you. By only notifying other reviewers of its existence by replying to their comments, and skulking around yours...

Or post big warnings in huge letters across the top of it, yelling, "GWYNRAVEN, DON'T READ THIS!!" or something similar.

'Cause I've kind of started writing it now... and it won't let me stop.

I'll try and sort the Jantolution March challenges first, though. :) Happy ending there.

[beccaelizabeth]

action and adventure with logic, yaay

[laligin]

*blush, hide* Thanke. Logic is... well. Logical. I can't help myself sometimes. :)

[crystalshard]

I like this. I can't help wondering what the Time Agency would do if it caught up with Jack, and this is a fascinating exploration. You've got such a vivid imagination.

Plus, hooray happy ending! (Except for the Time Agents, of course.)

[laligin]

Hee. Thank you very much.

(I kinda feel sorry for the Time Agents. Even if they were absolute swines.)

[sunnyrea]

Awww that was awesome. I loved your description of the ship and your Jack is nice and brutal, I love it. I liked how you made it gorey but not too gorey, very nice indeed!

[laligin]

Thanke kindly. Believe it or not I had to stop when I was writing this and sit down and work out the corridor numbering system, to make sure it worked properly for me. (Yes, I am that sad pedantic.) Heh. Glad you liked!

[sunnyrea]

Oh no, I love that. I try to be as anal as possible to realistic detail when I write my fics and I love it others. So, three cheers for you!

[laligin]

Excellent. ^_^ Most of the time little details like that bug me if they don't match up properly. :) Nice to know people appreciate the pernickety-ness. :D

[laligin]

^_^ Thank you muchly. (Ah. I'll see how the epilogue goes, and warn you as appropriate... :D)