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Part 1 for disclaimers and acknowledgments.
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It turns out that Annie has brought back more food from the manor - smoked beef, bread, cheese, some pies, fruit, a flagon of wine, a veritable feast compared to what he’s had the last few days. Guy asks her to eat with him, but she grabs only an apple and excuses herself for another run to
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Thank you for the kind words!
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Here Guy is very believable, in the state he was in after Meg's death; and you don't fall in the error of having him fall in love with Annie, or indeed immediately be struck by LUV for Seth. (He promises to "provide" for them and acknowledge Seth; not to marry Annie, which I think is also very much in character.) His regrets for Marian, and the stuff of his nightmares are hauntingly done, and I loved the "which is debatable" about his wanting to save himself. MOAR from you, please!!!
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To bad it's not going to be more.... I was hoping for more... Anyway, I loved it either way and I hope you will write something more soon! ;D
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Now a question: why, pray, does Ares appear to have leprosy in your banner? Or are those burns from getting a leeetle too close to the roaring flames of your passion, as depicted in the same banner? And if so, will Guy look like that after a couple of years too? :D
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Thank you so much for the beta and everything else! Can't wait to co-write the S3 AU story. :D As for the banner, hmm... you have a point there. LOL. It's temporary though, I should get a different header soon.
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