sunrise beat (clark/lois; icarus; flashfic)

[ladygawain]

So, asked people to prompt me on Twitter, got only two responses (which is a good thing, I guess, but hoped for more). Anyway, the request was for Clark/Lois, sunrise, DP or something. I'm sure a better writer will write something awesome for these two, I just needed to tickle my muse. This is FLASH FIC friends, so it's not going to be treated to

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[ladygawain]

Aw, thank you *smishes* This was partly for you, so I'm glad it didn't disappoint :)

rooftop nookie should just happen all the time.

[svgirl_203]

Sweet and sexy Clois, I loved it. Great fic. :)

[ladygawain]

Thank ye!!!!!!

[chrisluvstommy]

Where was I when u asked for a prompt? I'd gone to bed early boo but this is lovely. A turned on bashful,clueless Clark Kent is such a turn on! Nice work Maggie thank you for writing this

[ladygawain]

LOLZ. Bashful Clark might be my favorite, even though I like him when he takes charge too since that's the side that Lois so often brings out in him. He, thank yous!

[celticbabe2002]

I'm sitting here with a huge grin on my face! I loved that Maggie! So glad you asked for prompts on twitter and that I was there when you asked.

I really love Clark's reaction to Lois saying they could celebrate on the roof. I could totally picture that. The smut was great and I love that you even saw fit to make reference to them breaking the porch swing and Clark carving a new one.

I hope you get bored more often, then you can write fic!

[ladygawain]

Yippeee!!!!!!!!!! This sucker was partly for you too, soooo happy that you liked it :)

I love that Lois continually surprises him; it's like she pushes the boundaries further each time and he thinks 'Oh, no way I could do this!' but then he finds that Hell YEAH, he can do this because he's just as much a freak as she is, he's just quieter about it.

Hehe, canon, always need to slip in the canon, lol! That poor porch swing!

[celticbabe2002]

Before s10 began I lost track of how many fics for me became canon. The little moments, like Sana's fic of Clark taking Lois shopping for a new pair of jeans and so many fics that dealt with the porch swing. For me, this fic has joined that canon b/c 1 - it was well crafted even if spur of the moment and 2 - the first i've read that dealt with the post-engagement-party-pre-farmhouse scene.

But yeah, I don't mind you getting bored LOL

[cindythecookie]

*sigh* is it bad that I have to rely on fic nowadays to really enjoy Smallville? Like these perfect little moments are so gorgeous, cloisy, sexy and lovely at the same time and ok, as much as I adored Icarus, I feel like I've been cheated out of seeing a more intimate physical Clois relationship onscreen. I don't want the two of them humping on my screen for 42 mins a week (ok, maybe I do) but can we see some Clois snuggling in bed, or more hand holding, or something other than super quick pecks on the lips that last longer than 2 secs?

/rant.

Sorry about that, God, I'm such a buzzkill. This little baby was just what the doctor ordered after your Luthor piece, adorable and sexy, I lol'd at Clark's thoughts about trying to be the sensible one in the relationship, but totally not being able to resist Lois lip bite of lust and having to spend a Saturday building a new porch swing. *snort* Those two really do have a thing for doing the deed in public forums don't they? Mmmm kinky kinky.

[ladygawain]

LOL, rant away sweets, I feel your frustrations but now I'm just letting it float over me... well, after I rant for a few days. Sigh, I guess that's what we have fanfic for :/

Thank you :) Yay, glad you liked it, I needed therapy after the madness that was Luthor, and that story and this kind of helped. Hahahaha, the porch swing! And the two of them are kinky as hell, Clark's a freak --- so glad he has Lois to share that with.