fic: No Country for Old Men, Big Talk

[la_reverenda]

Also written for the Porn Battle and has likewise been edited since posting.

Big Talk
Fandom: No Country for Old Men
Characters: Llewellyn/Carla Jean

You keep runnin that mouth and I'm gonna take you back there and screw you.

Comments

[the_reverand]

It was harder than I thought to not use apostrophes! Or to know when to use them, because he sometimes does. Um.

[the_reverand]

I love Llewellyn. After reading the book I loved him more. And the spare language is something I've come to enjoy writing, but is probably even more spartan than usual thanks to writing this while reading the book, which is about as spare as they come. But in such an awesome way.

Thanks!

[the_reverand]

I meant to ask about the wordiness yo mentioned! Did I miss some awesome Jofic somewhere??