wow this is brilliant. It made my heart ache and i felt everything that Kris was feeling.
They were silent for a moment, just looking at each other, examining the familiar and insignificant features of each other’s faces - the curve of a jaw, the crease of a forehead, the slope of a nose - committing them to memory.
seriously, that was brilliance. I was bawling immediately and i could just picture it. Guh this was heart wrenching. I need something happy now to make this ache go away.
dammit all to hell WHY DOES EVERYONE KEEP KILLING THIS MAN?? I REALLY HOPE HE DOESN'T READ ON HERE, HE'S GONNA DEVELOP A COMPLEX OR SOMETHING!! ARRRRRGH! STOP KILLING THIS FINE ASS MO-FO!! PLEASE!
and no, i didn't read it, so, sorry, no compliments forthcoming now or ever.
apologies for BEING a raging bitch. this is like the "too many-ith" kill adam story i've come across since i came on lj, and it just bumms me out. NO REFLECTION ON YOUR WRITING. as i wrote above, i didn't read it, only because of the subject matter. i just hate the thought. shall i delete the comment altogether? it's your call.
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Before he even reached the second verse, Adam’s hand had stilled.
That killed me. So sad. Wonderful job though. *sobs*
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They were silent for a moment, just looking at each other, examining the familiar and insignificant features of each other’s faces - the curve of a jaw, the crease of a forehead, the slope of a nose - committing them to memory.
seriously, that was brilliance. I was bawling immediately and i could just picture it. Guh this was heart wrenching. I need something happy now to make this ache go away.
Never stop writing please.
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The goodbye kiss
Adam saying you know i will always be with you and will see you again
The i love you's on both parts
Otherwise heartbreaking but good!
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and no, i didn't read it, so, sorry, no compliments forthcoming now or ever.
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... and the scroll button.
no need to be a raging bitch.
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