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Round 06: The Day We (All) Broke Up

Apr 29, 2013 18:25

Title: The Day We (All) Broke Up
Team: Future
Rating: G
Fandom: ZE:A
Pairing: Siwan/Kwanghee
Summary: Kwanghee loses Siwan when ZE:A is five not nine.
Prompt Used: Ailee - I Will Show You (Supplementary Prompt #2)

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!fic post, cycle: 2013, 2013 round 6: i will show you, team future, fandom: ze:a

Comments 6

darkyulate April 29 2013, 15:59:30 UTC

How come the last poll reaches up to 10? Does that mean 10 is the highest?

olymficsmod April 29 2013, 23:31:07 UTC

No, 5 is still the highest mark as stated in the instructions. Sorry for this mistake. Please only pick from 1-5, 5 being the highest.

olymficsmod April 30 2013, 04:06:53 UTC

Voters, please note that the scale for question #3 (Rate how true this fic is to its team's genre) is supposed to be only up to 5. Please vote using the 1-5 (5 being the highest) scale only. Thank you.

almostkiwi May 5 2013, 07:38:29 UTC

Ouch, this fic really hurt :( It's a sad reality that many kpop fans have to face when their groups disband, but even worse when something like this happens and there are members that are cast out of the limelight, kind of just tossed aside. I think the sparseness of your writing and the shorter scenes really lent themselves to this. :) Good job!

madelyn93 May 5 2013, 08:43:08 UTC

i love love loved the scene about the birthday wish. it says so much in so little words.
i liked the little memories woven among the scenes too. sigh, of course junyoung would be the first one to cry.

the little bit of editing at the end was a nice touch! (knowing lj's hate for html, good job!)

galmaegi May 8 2013, 19:11:17 UTC

oh this was sad ;; i like the details here of the four that get left out trying to carry on a normal life and sticking by each other.