All I can say is: WOW. That is some plot right there, and it really hits you at the end when Key sees Luna and Onew happy together :( I'm not a fan of cheating in general, so I tend to avoid fics with it in there, but I have to say that your writing must've been something to keep me reading and for it affect me so much...
Thank you for bearing with it till the end ;; And yeah, as conceited as it sounds, I do feel proud of the plot. but I feel that my execution somehow did not do it justice ;A;
But thank you! Cheating is really a despicable thing but in a writer's pov it makes a good case so... ;;
this was gorgeous!! and despite some of the characters actions which I'm sure bothered some people at some point[I actually swore out loud - hardcore onkey fan] the storyline and everything just keeps you reading...one of my favorites so far, I just wish I could find some happier themes in fics this year...
Thank you ;; And yeah...character actions. I admit I indeed hate the way i constructed the events at times. ALSO A HARDCORE ONKEY FANS HERE KIBUM DID NOT DESERVE IT, JINKI WATERYOUDOING???
I would have forwarded you to happier themes if I could, but somehow my mood/muse is angst-laden? I'm sorry .__.
omg, omg, omg.. key named his precious baby with 'LEE' (forget he's indeed a Lee Taemin) not 'KIM', as referring himself, but as his ex-lover part!!! for second time, GOD, this fic is priceless!! my fav moment :
"I'm sorry, I can only allow the family to go in. Which one of you is the father?"
The question had struck them both, rendered them speechless as they were confronted by the complexity of their situation. Kibum glanced at Jinki, whom he found stared at him, and then pulled his hand away from Jinki's grasp.
"You go, hyung."
please, kll mee..
and onew, i love youu.. ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ (lots of love for you too author-nim)
OMG YOU NOTICED!! Yes, that's how Key actually kept his end of bargain when he said that "the baby will grow to become you"--to become a Lee that is Jinki!!
i cried a river while reading this.. the moment when kibum realised that jinki slept with luna, i cried with him. i cant really read the part jinki slept with luna. i just cant.. how could u jinki. i know its not luna's faults, but i really wish that night didnt happen. when jinki said he wish he met luna 1st.. i cant anymore..
u r giving me so many emotions with this fic. i wish i know who is the writer so i can salute her..
I'm really happy that you got the essence of what I tried to convey here, that I really did not want to put the blame on anybody--especially Luna, that it was just a series of misfortune. And Kibum himself really could--if he wanted to--hang on Jinki. But he did not, because he was thinking of Luna's feeling, and that was why he took his decision.
I'm sorry for giving you emotions, but in a way I feel proud and thankful because my writing moves you. Thank you so much for reading!
LOL Your way of thinking is almost the same with my friend. She even came to the point where she wished that Luna was dead giving birth and OnKey ended up together again XD
Personally, as an OnKey shipper, I dislike the ending as well. But I feel like this time I want to make a fic that is plausible to happen in real world. I asked a lot of 'what if' while putting myself in my characters' shoes and here's the result.
I'm a shipper of virtually anything, but I really liked the idea. Before I even read it, I knew what the premise was going to be. How much I have dreamed of a fic like this. Seriously. Before I started reading, I was hoping Jinki and Luna would be together but when I started to read it, I changed my mind. I really like the idea of falling in love with another person because I believe loving only one person singularly forever is a little rare. But then I disliked Luna because she was supposed to be this strong warrior chick (totally in my head btw) and her reaction to everything just made me itch because I just wanted her to be the strong one and not Kibum.
Omg long rant...sorry I reeeeealllllly loved this. ugh, I just love this so much. It's realistic but also sad because you could think of so many other endings but you know that none of them would fix things. omg let me leave before I unload my baggage or something. lol
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And yeah, as conceited as it sounds, I do feel proud of the plot. but I feel that my execution somehow did not do it justice ;A;
But thank you! Cheating is really a despicable thing but in a writer's pov it makes a good case so... ;;
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And yeah...character actions. I admit I indeed hate the way i constructed the events at times. ALSO A HARDCORE ONKEY FANS HERE KIBUM DID NOT DESERVE IT, JINKI WATERYOUDOING???
I would have forwarded you to happier themes if I could, but somehow my mood/muse is angst-laden? I'm sorry .__.
THANK YOU ONCE AGAIN!!
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for second time, GOD, this fic is priceless!!
my fav moment :
"I'm sorry, I can only allow the family to go in. Which one of you is the father?"
The question had struck them both, rendered them speechless as they were confronted by the complexity of their situation. Kibum glanced at Jinki, whom he found stared at him, and then pulled his hand away from Jinki's grasp.
"You go, hyung."
please, kll mee..
and onew, i love youu.. ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ (lots of love for you too author-nim)
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AND LOT'S OF LOVE TO YOU TOO!! Thank you!!! <3
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the moment when kibum realised that jinki slept with luna, i cried with him.
i cant really read the part jinki slept with luna. i just cant..
how could u jinki. i know its not luna's faults, but i really wish that night didnt happen.
when jinki said he wish he met luna 1st.. i cant anymore..
u r giving me so many emotions with this fic.
i wish i know who is the writer so i can salute her..
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I'm really happy that you got the essence of what I tried to convey here, that I really did not want to put the blame on anybody--especially Luna, that it was just a series of misfortune. And Kibum himself really could--if he wanted to--hang on Jinki. But he did not, because he was thinking of Luna's feeling, and that was why he took his decision.
I'm sorry for giving you emotions, but in a way I feel proud and thankful because my writing moves you.
Thank you so much for reading!
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Personally, as an OnKey shipper, I dislike the ending as well. But I feel like this time I want to make a fic that is plausible to happen in real world. I asked a lot of 'what if' while putting myself in my characters' shoes and here's the result.
Thanks a lot!
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Omg long rant...sorry I reeeeealllllly loved this. ugh, I just love this so much. It's realistic but also sad because you could think of so many other endings but you know that none of them would fix things. omg let me leave before I unload my baggage or something. lol
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