[FIC] Butterfly - Never Again

[kitsune_hikaru]

Title: Butterfly - Never Again

Author: kitsune_hikaru

Category: One-Shot

Pairing: JinDa, RyoPiN friendship

Rating: PG-13

Genre: Romance

Disclaimer: I don’t own them, happy? T____T

Summary: For Jin to fly high, he needs a pair of ‘wings’, and a place to perch on.

Warning: Un-betaed. Really...

A/N: Sequel to Butterfly. Sorry, turns out to be longer than I expected.

Comments

spot for Vikki

[kitsune_hikaru]

Spot for jarithka

u can point my mistakes of course, dearie... it would be so much welcomed~~ ^^

Re: spot for Vikki

[jarithka]

OH MY GOD. ♥ The sequel and a spot for me *_____________* Oh my god, dear, you're awesome, thank you so much for them ♥♥♥ I'm so touched now *_____*
I love you, too ♥

The conversation between Tatsuya and Ryo was really interesting. I love how you write Tatsuya, because I think he is so like here in the real life. He is quiet, he doesn't yell anytime he is hurt. And I respect him for it. And I respect Ryo here for trying to make the things fixed.

Ah, and Jin appeared in front of Uepi's door ;_________; ♥ Such a little baka... but I'm happy because Tatsuya wouldn't have gone to Jin. Because he is the one who was left. And... just not.

AHH~ *_____________* ♥ And they made up! Oh my God, I'm so glad~~~
This part, "Give me this one night, Tat-chan. I’ll prove to you how much you mean to me...", this is my favourite part *_________

Re: spot for Vikki

[kitsune_hikaru]

*laughs*
really, the ryo-uepi conversation had been edited for gazillion times already... i made it pi at first, but then i thought if it was pi, the conversation would be too polite n they might drag longer... bcoz PiDa is much more friendlier than that... hehe... yeah, tat-chan is quiet but not unfriendly... i tried to give that impression here, i hope i didnt fail... tat-chan never yell, did he?? X(

haha... yerp, i made jin the one who came back, bcoz i cant imagine tatsuya who went to jin's house... he just dont have the image to go n reconcile with his ex... but jin needed tat-chan's message to make the move... ryo succeeded at that... ^^

n that last scene, i've been flicking between pi n ryo all the time, i'm sorry if it sounded weird... lol~ XD

*hugs u*
thank u sooooo much for ur lovely comment~~
i love u tooo~
u dont have to feel bad about it, i just want to write for u... n u can learn slowly too... *wink*
*hugs u again so u feel better*

[snow_meow]

I am glad that Jin and Ueda got back together.

I think that it is a conspiracy as Ryo, Pi and Jin all corners Ueda on the same day about his feelings for Jin.

[kitsune_hikaru]

haha... yeah, i think so too...
actually i think it's more of ryopi's conspiracy... they corner ueda n shove jin to go to ueda's place...
who knows...
*shrugged*
lol~~
thank u sooo much for reading~
^^

[lilly0]

I just read it!!! XD I think this is one of my first JinDa Fics I read XD
It was soooooo good!!!!! Honestly... I like Ueda being mature and not whiny! He was so cool!
And Jin was somehow...adorable XD Cool...and sweet... and dorky...and sexy!

And it's great that Ueda realized it in the end: Everyone needs his friends or other things he can rely on!

Thanks so much for writing this!!!!! <3

[kitsune_hikaru]

*laughs*
i dont know why, but i always tend to make people read their first jinda... hahaha...
i dont have the image of whiny ueda... i never him that way... he used to cry a lot when he was a junior, but he never yelled nor whined... i dont know where people get that impression of him...

n jin is just... jin~ haha... he IS adorable n cool n sweet n dorky n sexy... haha... that's why we love him~~ XD
i'm glad i didnt fail at that... XP

yeah, i dont like the idea of jin ditching his friends just bcoz he's in love with someone else... :P
n dont kill me, i've been flicking between pi n ryo in their scenes, so it's kinda messed up coz i gave up to fix their characters... lol~ XP

n thank u soo much for reading too...
*hugs u tightly*

[deshisoraba]

So beautiful! Thank you very much for the Jinda!
I really hope that in reality Jin misses KAT-TUN at least a little bit.

[kitsune_hikaru]

*hugs u*
thank u soooo much for reading, dear~
^^
yeah, i hope so too...
but i think he does think about KAT-TUN in reality... they are friends to some point anyway... ;)

[journal_chaos]

Oh I love your Jinda! It's so wonderful and I love Tat-chan in this story!
Thank you so much for it!

[kitsune_hikaru]

i'm glad u love my jinda... hehe...
idk, their crosstalks always give me the image of jin being the silly one n uepi being the one taking care of him... lol~
thank u so much for reading~ ^^