You, Pigface and I (Chapter One of Two)

Sep 14, 2009 21:44

Title: You, Pigface and I (Chapter One of Two)
Author: kissthecoffin
Pairings: Yunjae, past YunSu, Yoosu
Warnings: mpreg, humor,a dash of angst, and, by means of association, crack.
Rating: NC-17
Summary: “I can’t believe you called little Yunjae a tumor!” Jaejoong huffed, handing over his shopping bags. Yunho scowled. “Would you quit calling it ( Read more... )

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srijoni_rhea September 15 2009, 05:36:03 UTC
there's so much in this i can't even begin to explain. there's the crack of course, but there's so much underlying angst... i can't help but wonder how it all plays out in the end. waiting for part two (:

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xox_roxygurl September 15 2009, 05:48:23 UTC
i like this D: hehe cant wait for 2nd part ^^

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yunhogirl23 September 15 2009, 05:54:22 UTC
I feel mixed right now...
I feel so sad that there's so many shit going on around them and their status and all and then there's the whole hosu yoosu thing going on that I barely believed in the Yunjae in between...

But I am happy with the yunjae love child that has been created...

I just hope there's a happy ending to this...I'm so depressed from all the angst I've been reading lately...

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_happy_as_rain_ September 15 2009, 06:22:47 UTC
I really like this.

This isn't broken, or elsewise "perfect, in love" Yunjae... they have problems, it's frustration, not-love, uncertainty... it's very real. Underneath the humor there's a lot of underlying tension and frustration and I really like how it's depicted--Yunho's in love with someone else first, and Jaejoong's kinda the backup--

I'm really, really excited to read the end.

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twiglet71 September 15 2009, 06:26:52 UTC
Very good. I thik you summed up a new dad's doubts and fears really well. Looking forward to the next part xxx

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