Miss You Much (Make You Mine) [Prompt #196] (2/2)

[yeolis]

Title: Miss You Much (Make You Mine)
Rating: NC-17
Length: 11,856 words
Warnings: smut, multiple rounds of said smut, eventual bottom!yifan, yifan’s unfortunate life
Summary: Missing you has become a bad habit of mine...
Notes: somewhere along the way of writing this this just ended up being an excuse for me to drool over an unhealthy amount of mym

Comments

[huangjinguo]

HOW DO I BEGIN TO COMMENT ON THAT.
THAT WAS PERFECTION.

First of all because I'm a sucker for bottom!Yifan. Second of all because I'm a sucker for Yixing initiating things.
I should actually be at a point where I shouldn't be that bothered by sex between those two but this was just so good I had to scream into my pillow I'M---!!!

I loved everything about it. From the conversations between Yifan and Luhan (YOU LITTLE SHIT I LOVE YOU) to the weird shit Yifan said and did to the two being together and the Mandarin used (I ACTUALLY GOT THE PUNCHLINE I'M PROUD OF MYSELF??) I'M JUST AT LOSS FOR WORDS I CANNOT DESCRIBE WHAT I'M FEELING RIGHT NOW.

THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS.

EXCUSE ALL THE CAPS I CANNOT HELP MYSELF.

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oh my goodness gracious THANK YOU SO MUCH STRANGER (HOPEFULLY FOR NOT MUCH LONGER)
lol the smut was actually a lot easier to write than I expected it to be but it was still kinda hard (no pun intended) bc it's like...okay so when are the pants supposed to come off

I LOVED MY LUHAN TOO AND I'M REALLY GLAD YOU CAUGHT THAT PUNCHLINE THAT I WROTE AT 5AM

tbh seeing this as my first comment made me so happy, words cannot describe -- thank you so much for making my return to ficdom a pleasant one, I really appreciate your love (^｡^)

[huangjinguo]

YOU DESERVE ALL THE LOVE LET ME SHOWER YOU IN GLORY. *cries*

This was just really so good I'm still at loss for words lmao I hope to see MOOOOORE of you :)))

♥

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LOL THANK YOU SO MUCH, do you happen to be the friend that lowy was telling me about (I just became friends with lowy post her playboy bunny xing oh my lORD), the one that freaked out over this omg bc that's so sweet and cute I can't you're the best

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MOTHER I CAN'T WITH THIS
hearing such kind words from someone who I look up to when doing my prose, honestly I can't begin to tell you about (HOW IT'S GONNA FEEL), like my face is just melting off okay

I hope you didn't get kicked out and please don't stop writing I live for your one liners
I really flew too far with the bald yifan even I'm quite amused

I CAN'T BELIEVE THE ENGLISH MAJOR IS COMPLIMENTING MY PROSE AND MY VOCABULARY FHDBDHDHSBSB

I love my Luhan too, the rhyming was not intentional but it just came out anyways, and the ending was just...idek

now I just gotta write more stuff lol 谢谢妈妈我非常爱你！

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THANK YOU SO MUCH OMG YOU'RE MY PROMPTER RIGHT?! I might have done some major stalking and backtracking on Twitter post reveals lol I'LL TWEET YOU LATER OKAY I MUST THANK YOU LEGITIMATELY

the bottom!yifan was definitely different to write and I prize my Luhan/Wufan banter greatly too; Yifan is so dumb and I had to bring the ot12 okay lol

I'M HONESTLY SO SURPRISED WITH MYSELF THAT I WAS ABLE TO INCLUDE THE CHINESE AS WELL I was afraid I was gonna make a mistake and end up offending someone, or my egghead baby thing wouldn't actually be endearing etc etc

Thank you for reading this and enjoying this as much as you did!

[olympianlove]

Is it bad that I can totally see Yixing doing everything in this fic? Because the whole time I was reading this, I had images running through my head. Thanks for that by the way, now everyone on the train probably thinks I'm mentally unsound because of the way I keep smiling down at my phone.

I would totally quote from the fic my favourite parts but I can't exactly repost the entire fic in the comments. Luhan is such a lil shit in this. And Yixing too.

thank you so much for writing this! I can't wait for the reveals :)

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it's not bad at all and I'm actually so flattered you said all these things love, thank you so much oh my god I'm happy to have written something you enjoyed! AND YOU'RE THE ONE THAT WROTE THE SEAL PENGUIN FIC I CAN'T YOU'RE SO GOOD (GOOD) AND CUTE AHFHDHDHD

I take pride in my Lu-ttle shit and YIXING was definitely fun to write in this as well. Thank you again for commenting (＾ｰ^)

[fandangopink]

this is amazing omg
yifan being a stalker-ish boyfriend watching fancams of yixing ok icu yifan icu
also your luhan is such an annoying little shit lmao i love him

i haven't read any bottom!yifan in a while but i love it here you wrote it very well thank you so much

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thank you so much for commenting on this I really appreciate a lot a lot a lot （≧∇≦）
tbh this is like my first time actually dealing with bottom yifan as well I usually don't read up on it that much so this was definitely an interesting experience
I thank you for thanking me lol does that make sense? Thanks for being so sweet !!