Look, when someone says something, the first word of the quote is capitalized. When someone new says something, you begin a new paragraph. Quotation marks should never be back to back. Ever. And please split the fic into paragraphs. Gigantic bricks of text makes me dizzy, gives me headaches, and is almost guarunteed to make people skim over
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King Mickey is also small, but he's considered the seme in many relationships.
... K. I'll go back to my corner now.
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>_> Short and skinny doesn't mean weak, really. Why can't the fantwits get THAT when they write as well?
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On the other hand, I'm quite tall (at least compared to the female standard in my country) and I'm the worst fighter in the world. My younger sisters always won our fights XD.
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And tall people aren't always stronger, either. I have a friend who's about 5'11 and weaker than a newborn kitten. She only weighs about 100 pounds though, so that might have something to do with it.
I, on the other hand, am only 5'2 and have kicked many a taller person's ass. Sometimes literally XD.
KHFFRants - making stereotypes null and void since...uh...whenever the community started.
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^_^ So very true.
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And I never thought I'd see the words "delicate" and "Axel" in the same sentence--wtf? xD Axel is so not weak. Have you seen his chakrams? He twists them like they're paper and from how he holds them they don't look light. Skinny, yes, but frail weakling? No. That applies to just about everyone. And no, the TT fight doesn't "prove" Axel's weak because we all know if he was an upper level boss, he'd be a huge pain in the ass to fight :P
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Out of the two, I'd say the first one, but I'd cry if he did the warp thing D: D: Stand still so I can hurt you!!
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And KH!Cloud? Small!?
AHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! Someone's really blind~~~
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