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Nov 26, 2006 01:56

Look, when someone says something, the first word of the quote is capitalized. When someone new says something, you begin a new paragraph. Quotation marks should never be back to back. Ever. And please split the fic into paragraphs. Gigantic bricks of text makes me dizzy, gives me headaches, and is almost guarunteed to make people skim over ( Read more... )

yaoi, formatting

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powercorrupts November 26 2006, 02:05:00 UTC
KH!Cloud is small and delicate? Have these people seen his arms? xDD

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abiding November 26 2006, 07:31:29 UTC
Mmmmm, KH!Cloud arms...

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landcow November 26 2006, 02:14:09 UTC
The subject matter has been memorized.

King Mickey is also small, but he's considered the seme in many relationships.

... K. I'll go back to my corner now.

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princealia November 26 2006, 02:44:34 UTC
They don't call him King Mickey for nothing! XD

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abiding November 26 2006, 07:32:00 UTC
XDDD

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flowerings November 26 2006, 03:21:16 UTC
And now I will never be able to watch anything with Mickey ever again.

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lazzchan November 26 2006, 02:17:55 UTC
I'm short, but my hands are strong and I got one wicked kick. :) I generally can kick directly in the knees and have people on the floor easily.

>_> Short and skinny doesn't mean weak, really. Why can't the fantwits get THAT when they write as well?

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kangaroop November 26 2006, 03:35:40 UTC

On the other hand, I'm quite tall (at least compared to the female standard in my country) and I'm the worst fighter in the world. My younger sisters always won our fights XD.

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__fantine November 26 2006, 03:47:40 UTC
Short and skinny doesn't mean weak, really.
And tall people aren't always stronger, either. I have a friend who's about 5'11 and weaker than a newborn kitten. She only weighs about 100 pounds though, so that might have something to do with it.
I, on the other hand, am only 5'2 and have kicked many a taller person's ass. Sometimes literally XD.
KHFFRants - making stereotypes null and void since...uh...whenever the community started.

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lazzchan November 26 2006, 03:48:26 UTC
XD!!!

^_^ So very true.

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princealia November 26 2006, 02:42:41 UTC
Psh, none of those characters are ukes anyways. Nope. Sora? Demyx? Cloud? Ukes? lol. Or better yet...Roxas an uke? Ha. That's even funnier. No way are they ukes. LALALA NOT LISTENING LALALALALA. THEY'RE NOT UKES LALALA!!

And I never thought I'd see the words "delicate" and "Axel" in the same sentence--wtf? xD Axel is so not weak. Have you seen his chakrams? He twists them like they're paper and from how he holds them they don't look light. Skinny, yes, but frail weakling? No. That applies to just about everyone. And no, the TT fight doesn't "prove" Axel's weak because we all know if he was an upper level boss, he'd be a huge pain in the ass to fight :P

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princealia November 26 2006, 06:32:14 UTC
Oh dude, I haven't seen you in forever! *glomps* xD

Out of the two, I'd say the first one, but I'd cry if he did the warp thing D: D: Stand still so I can hurt you!!

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abiding November 26 2006, 07:33:46 UTC
I am 5'3" and I can kick some major ass, kthnx.

And KH!Cloud? Small!?

AHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! Someone's really blind~~~

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