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kelly1_watxm

[Fanfic] Stones and Slab - Part 1/4 - Wolverine and the X-Men

May 10, 2010 20:28

Posting fic during playoff commercials. Wooop, hockey!

Title:Stones and Slab
Part: 1/4
Word count: 6911
Rating/Warnings: M for language, implied adult situations. Contains M/M, F/F.
Characters: B.O.M. ensemble - team fic. Dominic POV.
Pairings: Pietro/Dominic, implied one-sided Domino/Rogue, and Mortimer/Pietro if you squint a little.
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slash, character:quicksilver, character:domino, marvel, character:blob, character:avalanche, character:toad, fanfiction, watxm

Comments 2

lithiumlaughter May 11 2010, 01:29:50 UTC

I'm just going make this brief and say that:
a) I am still so incredibly jealous of your ability to navigate timeline in creative ways. First that John fic that started it all, now this. NICE.
b) You are amazing at nailing a brotherhood group dynamic. You've captured them all so well and so distinctly. I love Neena and Pietro attempting to outsnark each other, the 'newbies' and their disengaged, separate sort of presence...just, wow.
c) Dominic is, contrary to my expectations, a very engaging narrator. Stoic, but the epitome of 'still waters run deep'. I kind of adore/am frustrated with him for his keep calm, carry on attitude, but it's so beautifully captured that I forgive him because I like him, and want to see what's next.

A'ight, girl.

You've got me strapping in for this ride. Let's do this.

kelly1_watxm May 14 2010, 00:15:20 UTC

:: hands you an aviator hat and vintage pilot goggles :: I'm pleased to have you aboard, Ms. O'Leary. I will try my best to not steer us off-course. :) Feel free to parachute to saftey should that start to happen. I have absolutely no objectivity left when it comes to this, and I secretly feel it may be horrible...

a) I was honestly a little worried this was going to come off as a bit disjointed and jumpy overall. I'm all blushy and pleased and preening that you seem to think it's working so far (Squeeeeeeeeeeeephappyfangirlishappy) (Also, heading use was definitely inspired by Twelve Gauge Coffee heh) I'm at least happy this allows me to switch between timelines without resorting to swimming textsperms ~* ~* ~* ~*

b) I may have a rampant obsession slight fancy for both morally-grey villains and team dynamics. The BOM makes me quite happy indeed and Pietro/Neena snark may just be my new favourite thing ever heh. (I also had to work Rogue in there because, well... she's Rogue and awesome. I totally don't ( ... )