heroes: moving (6/7)

[keldjinfae_moon]

Title: "Found My Heart Somewhere With My Rhythm"
Author: kel_fish
Fandom: Heroes
Characters: Nathan/Peter
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimers: Heroes is owned by NBC, Kring, and others who aren't I.
Author's note: Written for the mission_insane prompt, "Carpet." This is the sixth part of the Moving series, and is dedicated to thepansythug for Valentine's Day. Also, many thanks to him, as

Comments

[thepansythug]

Beautiful. It's so easy to get lost in this series. I loved it all, of course, but this exchange:

Peter rolled his eyes in annoyance even as he smiled; Nathan was task-oriented, and he’d managed to convince him to set his schedule aside temporarily. He joined Nathan in the shower, waiting for his turn with the soap. “Thanks for helping me move,” he said, both wanting to express his gratitude for everything his brother was doing for him, as well as break through the silence.

“I wanted to make sure it got done right,” Nathan explained, already lathering himself up with his hand. He refused to make eye contact with Peter, lips pursed uncomfortably as if willing him to drop the subject.

was perfect; intimate and yet secretive, it really felt like them. It all did. Excellent, hot work once again.

[keldjinfae_moon]

Thank you. Heh, and that was one of the parts that you didn't beta. Well, at least I can stop smacking my head against the wall and start making out with it.

[fabrisse]

Porn for breakfast tastes good.

This series is interesting. I can't wait to see what's next.

[keldjinfae_moon]

Porn for breakfast tastes good.

I wish I could have myself a bowlful of porn every morning. Just add milk!

This series is interesting. I can't wait to see what's next.

Thank you! I hope I don't let you down!

[bettareader]

Finally, FINALLY, I'm commenting. I was just about to turn off my laptop when I was like "HER STORY! Durrr!"

I don't even know what to say because you already know how much I love your writing but I thought it was beautiful, hot, wonderful, fabulous... good. Yes, so good that I had to print it up, staple it together, walk to my bedroom, bumping into my father on the way and answer to his "What's that?" with a "WHAT? IT'S NOT GAY MALE PORN!! WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT?!?!? I mean, it's a story about unicorns and leprechauns! G'night dad!" Then slam the door in his face, put it under my pillow for safe keeping so the words could magically go into my brain at night giving me wonderful images which would then lead to WET DREAMS!!

YA, IT WAS GOOD!

I need more SUGAR! IT'S 1:48AM! HOLY CRAP!

[keldjinfae_moon]

I had to print it up, staple it together, walk to my bedroom, bumping into my father on the way...

So, you're printing up the porn again, huh? Yeah, I used to do that, too, when I didn't have internet access at home. *giggles* Page upon page of porn!

IT'S NOT GAY MALE PORN!!

AND THEY'RE DEFINITELY NOT BROTHERS EITHER!

Also, I'M ABOUT TO USE YOUR VACUUM! (Dirtay. Heh, heh. I'll put my towel on your rack, baby. That's right, I'll scan your photos)

[oh_mcgee]

"Peter came violently, digging his knees into the floor as he squeezed his brother’s body between his legs and pounded the floor with his fist."

SNFL;DK I LOVE THE IMAGERY.

Honestly, I'd thought I'd read this already. I am srsly losing my marbles.

[keldjinfae_moon]

EEEE! GLORIOUS DEAN ICON PIMPAGE! It looks like he's looking at me while leaning up against a wall. *dies*

I LOVE THE IMAGERY

Thank you!

Honestly, I'd thought I'd read this already.

Meh, it happens. Thanks for "giving it another go," since you just might have. Late night porn-reads do that to a person every once in awhile.

[mystery_sock]

Faaaabulous. I wish Nathan could help me move! He brings extra goodies. He's so deliciously authoritative sometimes.

[keldjinfae_moon]

If Nathan helped me move, there would be no moving and then I'd end up having to do it all myself the next day. Not that I'd complain or anything... *closes eyes and swallows*