supernatural: only natural

[keldjinfae_moon]

Title: Only Natural
Author: kel_fish
Fandom: Supernatural
Characters: Dean/Sam
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Underage, as well as a few tiny spoilers for the pilot episode and “Bloody Mary.”
Disclaimer: Supernatural is owned by Kripke and others who aren’t I.
Author’s note: This was my first Supernatural fic. I wrote it a few years ago when I was still posting

Comments

[shelgrainger2]

That was great. It was nice to see the boys grow together and finally realise that all though it may be wrong to others to them it was right. A great read.

[keldjinfae_moon]

Thank you! Most of the plot bunnies in my head involving the Winchester brothers involve their first time. Or just the build-up to their first time. Thanks for reading!

[bettareader]

That was totally super natural! HA!

Yep, you've definitely gotten me hooked.

*kicks you with love*

[keldjinfae_moon]

*kicks you with love*

That's the best kind of kick! *squiggles*

[keldjinfae_moon]

Interesting to read a story in second person POV

Urgh. I wasn't sure why I wrote this in second person POV, but it didn't quite seem to work any other way, so I stuck with it.

Thank you for reading! And I love your icon, btw.

[thepansythug]

I can tell this is stronger now, character-wise, and I haven't, as we know, even seen the show. In general you smoothed it out very well, not just canonically but with a few little touches that made it flow better in general.

I loved Dean's confession about coming too soon, btw, because that's the kind of convincing character moment that you don't get in slash a lot what with all the magical porn getting in the way.

Good work again. You're a good self-editor.

[keldjinfae_moon]

I can tell this is stronger now, character-wise, and I haven't, as we know, even seen the show

This will change! We have a list now! *laughs maliviously, for some reason*

I loved Dean's confession about coming too soon, btw, because that's the kind of convincing character moment that you don't get in slash

This just seemed like a conversation that would actually happen between the Winchester brothers. Plus, Dean is so smooth with women in the show, but he's not perfect, so I had to write that part with him being not a god the first time.

Good work again. You're a good self-editor

Meh meh.

[oh_mcgee]

Bwee! So much love. Queen songs ftw. Shower sex also ftw. Yay Wincest!

[keldjinfae_moon]

Yay! Comment love from mah fellow Wincester/Petrellicester! This icon is clearly of Dean about to step into the shower. At least, this is what I choose to believe. All right! 25 comments!