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keldjinfae_moon

heroes: blue christmas

Aug 23, 2007 16:15

Title: "Blue Christmas"
Author: kel_fish
Fandom: Heroes
Characters: Nathan/Peter, OC/Peter
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Heroes is owned by NBC, Kring, and others who aren't I.
Author's note: This is my first Heroes fic, y'all!
Summary: Nathan doesn't approve of Peter's Christmas present.

( It was the most beautiful thing Nathan had ever seen... )

peter, rating: pg-13, nathan, pairing: nathan/peter, fanfiction, fandom: heroes

Comments 4

linaerys August 27 2007, 17:33:41 UTC

Nicely done. I hope you write more!

keldjinfae_moon August 28 2007, 17:46:38 UTC

Thank you! I originally had written something much longer, but it just seemed so redundant and entirely unnecessary that I tried to make it a drabble, but then there wasn't enough. *sigh

Less than a month until the Heroes premiere and we get to see a shirtless, short-haired Peter and an eerily-bearded Nathan! The cool thing is that the season two premiere airs on my birthday! Kickass! It's like NBC is giving me my best birthday present ever, and I get to read your latest Nathan/Peter installment soon, too! Yay!

thepansythug December 16 2007, 00:26:10 UTC

Your first Heroes fic -- awesome. Nathan tormented by secret desire for Peter = hotness. I love his wry frame of mind, how he understood why the now-hated boy had to do it:

He knew the desperation for just a few stolen moments to make Peter writhe with need; had he not had such moments in his dreams?

Beautiful.

keldjinfae_moon December 16 2007, 00:48:12 UTC

Your first Heroes fic--awesome.

I actually don't know what to think about this one. I was more nervous about writing Nathan than just writing Heroes alone; his character is so complex that I had to keep this story short so I wouldn't mess him up.

Beautiful.

Thank you. *grins* I would have deleted this if I hadn't wanted something to look back on and almost-cringe at. lol