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FIC: Safety of Illusions (Human Series)

Aug 04, 2011 17:04

Title: Safety of Illusions
Author: Keelywolfe
Fandom: TF: Bayverse
Series: Human Series: Chapter: 50

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[fandom] transformers, [series] human series

Comments 19

xianghua August 4 2011, 21:28:52 UTC

YIKES.
OMG. Every time I think the next chapter can't possibly be any better!

This line made me almost spittake.
"Yes, I'll just grow myself a set of breasts, why didn't I think of that? Oh, probably because it's moronic." Ratchet flickered his optics impatiently. "I'll leave the breasts to you and the good captain. Looks good when he overloads, though," Ratchet gave him a wolfish grin. "You just look stupid.

Found a typo: I think you mean tactile for those tacticals. :P

"Not these toys!" Ratchet squirmed uncomfortable, "You’re sitting too close. Humans are very tactile, ergo, Sam is very tactical and so-"

"The receptors are very tactical. That's interesting," He reached over and drew one finger down Ratchet's arm and the medic yelped.

keelywolfe August 4 2011, 21:35:15 UTC

ROFL! Thanks for the catch on that one. Ironhide probably likes tacticals, Sam, not so much. *G*

xianghua August 4 2011, 22:11:00 UTC

*snicker* Yeah, that doesn't really seem like his thing.

GAH Sam, could you not at least TELL THEM WHER YOU ARE GOING? IdiotSam! (On second read-through...)

darksirocco August 4 2011, 21:44:31 UTC

poor Ratch...i agree with 'Hide, though-gotta be awful, getting fragged through the floor by Optimus so much...
i've never been a fan of Bee/Sam before this story, but i think you've converted me. XD
ooooh! *wanna know more about the mysterious red-headed stranger in the bathroom!* is it willie nelson?! *wanders off humming 'on the road again'*
great update-so glad to see this one progressing! love it!
-Siro =^.^=

femme4jack August 4 2011, 22:49:58 UTC

O_o who is the mysterious red-headed con, and what did he do to Sam's neck? And why do I think no good will come of them leaving Mik and this folks behind? And sweet Bee said "fuck off!" Oh my!!!

Great chapter. Oh, the interactions between Ratchet and Hide just had me rolling. Boobies!!!!!
And just because Ratchet and Hide were discussing the topic

Bummer of an STD, Ratchet. Getting fragged by Prime on a regular basis. I feel so sorry for you.

And Hide wants to make squishy noises with Lennox. Gah, I love so much.

keelywolfe August 4 2011, 23:18:58 UTC

Bummer of an STD, Ratchet. Getting fragged by Prime on a regular basis. I feel so sorry for you.

Man, I know. Must be rough on the poor guy. That is the most awesome vid. Much as I love TF:Prime, nothing can replace the cheese factor of G:1. *G*

mmouse15 August 4 2011, 23:56:39 UTC

OK, the Sam/Decepticon part was scary, Keely. But I agree that they should tell Sam's parents and Mikaela that they're being deserted!

Oh, my gods. Ratchet and Ironhide had me ROFL. Poor Ratchet, having to get fragged by Optimus so frequently. The cure might be worse than the disease. I love how Hide and Ratch teased each other, too. That was pretty damned awesome.

Hurray for updates!

camfield August 5 2011, 02:51:30 UTC

OMIGAWD!

Sam! Haven't you learned your lesson with not telling people stuff that will make them angry with you! The leaving people behind seems to be a pattern here, lol.

And Bee! Letting him do it again! Come on man!

Also, this has nothing to do with this chapter, but when I read the first paragraph it made me think of the last chapter and Bee's blow jobs. Cuz Bee must 'pee' out a heckuva lot of jizz, LOL.

That aside, another great chapter that had me on edge. I love your stories so much! Thank you for writing!